Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

It seems as though you have only a taste of a bigger story line here. I liked what I read and I also liked the imagery in this short piece. It was my pleasure to have read and written this response for it... John

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016

Thanks so much for reading my work and for this review. I may revisit the poem because I agree with you about the beginning of a storyline. I appreciate your attention to my work and I apologize for not replying sooner!

luna

Comment from Gladys2013

Excellent

Awesome!! I can't imagine the difficulty you went through writing this and follow the formula you did. And great subject choice! Wizards and dragons, who doesn't love that?? Great work!

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016

Thanks so much for reading my work and for this review. I appreciate your attention to my work and I apologize for not replying sooner!

luna

Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Exceptional

"Dragonslayer" is an exceptionally well-written and delightfully written piece. This talented poet has with with and skill, told it as she sees it. It as a pleasure to both read and review a piece of this standard.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2016

Comment from Jumbo J

Excellent

Hi there Luna,
this style has that tongue twisting effect... and I love alliteration... ergo- I love this... a wonderful presentation-visually and penned perfectly.

With our thoughts we create,
a clearing energy.
James vx's.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016

Thanks so much for reading my work and for this review. I appreciate your attention to my work and I apologize for not replying sooner!

luna

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

Great poem. Nice running alliterations. Creative and causing the poem to drip with focused visual imagery. That tells a narrative story in a poem. Nice color choices and artwork too. Good work. Keep it up.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016

Thanks so much for reading my work and for this review. I appreciate your attention to my work and I apologize for not replying sooner!

luna

Comment from Lena Borghi

Excellent

Hi Luna,
This is a complex and challenging form and you've done a great job with it.
I enjoyed your story and will attempt this form one of these days when I have a little time to play with it. I thank you for sharing it.

Best wishes,
Lena

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016

Thanks so much for reading my work and for this review. I appreciate your attention to my work and I apologize for not replying sooner!

luna

reply by Lena Borghi on 06-Dec-2016

No worries, Luna. I, myself, often fall behind on my replies. Best wishes,
Lena

Comment from Drew Delaney

Excellent

Alliteration is a great poetry tool used by poets. You chose words well in this piece to say what you wanted. Keep up the good writing, Luna.

Have a good week. Drew xx

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016

Thanks so much for reading my work and for this review. I appreciate your attention to my work and I apologize for not replying sooner!

luna

Comment from royowen

Excellent

One of my favourite forms of verbal attack on expression, a very strong and effective method of expression, (although I couldn't imagine actiualy rhetoricising this method of communication, my one and only entry in this type of contest, I actually won, heh heh, this is a beauty, well done, blessings and good luck Jeni, Roy

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016

Thanks so much for reading my work and for this review. I appreciate your attention to my work and I apologize for not replying sooner!

luna

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-I love the image, so colorful, as well as the presentation.
-Thanks for sharing the form.
-You have done a good job with it,
and I like the topic.
-It seems "the warring wizard" must defeat
"the dangerous dragon" for peace in the kingdom.
-But more importantly, the maiden is now
using her own magic to gain the favor of the "magic man!"
-I like the poem; thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016

Thanks so much for reading my work and for this review. I appreciate your attention to my work and I apologize for not replying sooner!

luna

reply by Pam (respa) on 06-Dec-2016

You are quite welcome, Luna, and there's no problem with not replying sooner.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

Structured alliteration, what a wonderful idea
and the magical topic of fantasy and sorcery
fits it quite nicely
Wizard, dragon, king and maiden
Lusty liaison
The old wizard in the art work must be smiling greatly
Very nicely done

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016

Thanks so much for reading my work and for this review. I appreciate your attention to my work and I apologize for not replying sooner!

luna