Love Me
A love poem.17 total reviews
Comment from Ella25
Lovely words of love desire. To be tenderly touched and wanted. A beautiful composition for a love poem supported by the inspiring image. Well done. Blessings, Ella
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
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Lovely words of love desire. To be tenderly touched and wanted. A beautiful composition for a love poem supported by the inspiring image. Well done. Blessings, Ella
Comment Written 08-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Ella2, for reading and for your encouraging words. livelylinda
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You are welcome, my friend. Have a great day. Ella
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You are welcome, my friend. With love, Ella
Comment from Nika2016
The mating of the snowy egret? Very pretty in design
and also in words...a lovely
love poem in green and
white...
Nice writing
Write on
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2016
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The mating of the snowy egret? Very pretty in design
and also in words...a lovely
love poem in green and
white...
Nice writing
Write on
Comment Written 25-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2016
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Nika2016, thank you for reading and commenting. livelylinda
Comment from Oatmeal
livelylinda,
Your theme was well defined. The rhyming was well-done. Nicely effective and impressive. Very well reflected thoughts and expressions. This poem made for an enjoyable read. The artwork complements your poem.
There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.
Your feelings are very understandable and expressed through the poem.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2016
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livelylinda,
Your theme was well defined. The rhyming was well-done. Nicely effective and impressive. Very well reflected thoughts and expressions. This poem made for an enjoyable read. The artwork complements your poem.
There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.
Your feelings are very understandable and expressed through the poem.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 24-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2016
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Thank you so much, Oatmeal! livelylinda
Comment from MelB
Hi Linda, excellent syllable count in each stanza. A very nice poem about true love, its intent, and wanting to be loved in return.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2016
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Hi Linda, excellent syllable count in each stanza. A very nice poem about true love, its intent, and wanting to be loved in return.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2016
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Thank you,MelB, for reading and commenting. livelylinda
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You're welcome.
Comment from Pantygynt
A simply stated beautiful little poem with an interesting rhyme scheme over its three stanzas and a regular syllable count abcc, deff,ghii, and 4,5,7,7. And a lovely piece of artwork into the bargain.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2016
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A simply stated beautiful little poem with an interesting rhyme scheme over its three stanzas and a regular syllable count abcc, deff,ghii, and 4,5,7,7. And a lovely piece of artwork into the bargain.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2016
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Thank you for reading and commenting, Pantygynt. livelylinda
Comment from Bucketlist
This is what most people are seeking. You express tender love in an eloquent way. I am still waiting for mine! 4-5-7-7 is new to me, there is so much to learn. Great job !
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2016
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This is what most people are seeking. You express tender love in an eloquent way. I am still waiting for mine! 4-5-7-7 is new to me, there is so much to learn. Great job !
Comment Written 24-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2016
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Bucketlist: I did not get the 4-5-7-7 out of a text book. It is just how the poem flowed out of my pen. Thank you for reading and commenting. livelylinda
Comment from l.raven
Hi Dos, you sound so happy girl...I am sooooo happy for you...it is so hard to find true love...I love your poem...every word you...just stay happy my sweet friend...have a wonderful Thanksgiving Day...love ya you...Uno...xxoo
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2016
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Hi Dos, you sound so happy girl...I am sooooo happy for you...it is so hard to find true love...I love your poem...every word you...just stay happy my sweet friend...have a wonderful Thanksgiving Day...love ya you...Uno...xxoo
Comment Written 23-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2016
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Hi Linda!: yes, it was love at first sight and I am quite happy. Kathy lives 1 1/2 hours away so we don't see each other every day but we do communicate on Facebook and phone calls. She already had Thanksgiving plans with other family and responsibilities so we ate separately. I ate here at the house with Maureen who spent two days cooking everything. It was very good! I'll give you a call soon. Thanks for reading. I'm about to post another poem but don't have any money to support it so you will have to look for it. Linda
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I so happy for you...but sad you don't get to see each other so much...thanksgiving was good here as well...I off to find your other post...you are so very welcome...love ya Dos...xxoo Uno
Comment from krys123
Hello my friend, Linda, and happy holidays;
-looks like those two birds or storks are doing the nasty or what I should say the blessed love of creatures.
-You want tatted romantic piece of poetry is filled with metaphorical imagery that directly shows how much one may love another throughout their living years.
-Your third verse has an impact because the word trust is used which is very important in any type of relationship that concerns love.
-Thank you for sharing a touching piece of poetry and take care and have a good one and specially have a very happy Thanksgiving.
Alex
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2016
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Hello my friend, Linda, and happy holidays;
-looks like those two birds or storks are doing the nasty or what I should say the blessed love of creatures.
-You want tatted romantic piece of poetry is filled with metaphorical imagery that directly shows how much one may love another throughout their living years.
-Your third verse has an impact because the word trust is used which is very important in any type of relationship that concerns love.
-Thank you for sharing a touching piece of poetry and take care and have a good one and specially have a very happy Thanksgiving.
Alex
Comment Written 23-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2016
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Alex: thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts on this poem. Linda
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You are very welcome Linda.
Alex
Comment from robyn corum
Linda,
This was a fun little poem about love with very serious undertones. I liked it very much and think that anyone who received such a poem would like it as well. *smile* Great job!
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2016
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Linda,
This was a fun little poem about love with very serious undertones. I liked it very much and think that anyone who received such a poem would like it as well. *smile* Great job!
Comment Written 23-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2016
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Robyn: yes, Kathy liked it. It left her speechless! And, that is difficult to do . . . thanks for reading and hope you are having a wonderful Thanksgiving Day. Linda
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written love poem. All we need is the love of the one who we are in love with that will be the ultimate prize for lovers.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2016
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A very well-written love poem. All we need is the love of the one who we are in love with that will be the ultimate prize for lovers.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2016
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Sandra: this is totally reciprocated. Thank you for reading and commenting. Linda
