Comment from djeckert

Excellent

This story says a lot in those few words. It tells a story yet hints at many,many more stories not told or yet to tell. Well done. Bless you and good luck with this.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016

Thank you so much. I lived that once and it is actually true. But never again. Life is wonderful.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

Excellent entry for the sixty word dash contest
You've said a lot in those few words
Not much of a choice, is it?
But the right one without a doubt
Good use of the flowers in comparison
Well done
Good luck in the contest




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 Comment Written 22-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016

Thank you , so much. Sixty words are so tough. But it makes you really think and I enjoyed writing it. Thank you so much.

Comment from Rhonni

Excellent

Tells a story all in a short write. I can imagine it vividly as I have escaped an abusive significant other. It's simple, yet impactful. Nicely written

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 Comment Written 22-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016

thank you. That decision is a hard one. I know it was when I made it. I really did water the flowers before I left for good.

reply by Rhonni on 22-Nov-2016

That gives leaving a beautiful memory