Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "The Cycle"a place to gather my poetic forms
28 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is a lovely one for children and adults alike. You are a font of imagination and talent, Luna, you seem to be able to write about anything, and write it well. I like this one, because I enjoy reading and writing them, and then seeing the children's faces when we take them to magical places. well done again. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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This is a lovely one for children and adults alike. You are a font of imagination and talent, Luna, you seem to be able to write about anything, and write it well. I like this one, because I enjoy reading and writing them, and then seeing the children's faces when we take them to magical places. well done again. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 24-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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Dear Sandra... You write these also? I need to fan you so I can get notified when you post new work.
Thanks for your gracious review.
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I haven't written any for quite a while, my book has taken all my time, I just about manage to squeeze in the Picture This challenge poems. Writing children's story poems is my first love, and I've got 6 books published, one, my first book was published by Melrose Books, and I had a book signing in Waterstones, and Smiths, in the UK. I've kept some of them on here, but if you go down that road, make sure you click on NO to Fanstory putting them out to the world. I didn't realise that publishers won't use your work if it's already out there. I ended up self publishing my others. xx
Comment from Dr. Nad
Luna,The Cycle Is Either the third or fourth poem of yours. I have reviewed today LOL! I haven't kept track to see if you wrote them all today are not. I can imagine anybody is that good that they could write them all in one day so I don't think that's what's taking place. You are a talented writer with a painful story to tell. As you know, who we are comes out in our writing and the experiences that we've had Point us in the direction that we Follow. As your name foretells you have followed the trajectory of the moon. My hope and prayer is that it Has taken you to a place of divine peace! Thanks for sharing. Happy Thanksgiving. May God bless you!
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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Luna,The Cycle Is Either the third or fourth poem of yours. I have reviewed today LOL! I haven't kept track to see if you wrote them all today are not. I can imagine anybody is that good that they could write them all in one day so I don't think that's what's taking place. You are a talented writer with a painful story to tell. As you know, who we are comes out in our writing and the experiences that we've had Point us in the direction that we Follow. As your name foretells you have followed the trajectory of the moon. My hope and prayer is that it Has taken you to a place of divine peace! Thanks for sharing. Happy Thanksgiving. May God bless you!
Comment Written 24-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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Dear Dr. Nadir, we're only permitted to post two poems a day, so, they weren't all posted at once. I'm constantly writing though, so with the exceptions of the ones meant for the garbage can, I generally have a number on hand . Dr nad thank you for your lovely and insightful review ❤️❤️❤️
You are welcome.
Embrace the love from above.
Comment from rjuselius
this is an exquisite piece of poetry dear jeni! the imagery is breathtaking, the atmosphere lighthearted and the wording is positive. nice one my friend!
thank you for sharing!
virtual six!
blessings!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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this is an exquisite piece of poetry dear jeni! the imagery is breathtaking, the atmosphere lighthearted and the wording is positive. nice one my friend!
thank you for sharing!
virtual six!
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 24-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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Thanks for your lovely words, lovely rebekka. I'll accept and cherish the virtual six.
Comment from Oatmeal
Luna,
Very well reflected thoughts and opinions, expressiveness is working well. The flow was good. The theme was excellent! Your descriptive words were very good for explaining your ideas and your feelings.
A meadow waits for animals
out on their constitutionals.
Nocturnal trekkers' paths she lights,*
fairies resume their nightly flight.
*when you add an s to one and not the other then they no longer rhyme.
rhymezone.com will show you what rhymes.
Everything else is wonderful.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2016
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Luna,
Very well reflected thoughts and opinions, expressiveness is working well. The flow was good. The theme was excellent! Your descriptive words were very good for explaining your ideas and your feelings.
A meadow waits for animals
out on their constitutionals.
Nocturnal trekkers' paths she lights,*
fairies resume their nightly flight.
*when you add an s to one and not the other then they no longer rhyme.
rhymezone.com will show you what rhymes.
Everything else is wonderful.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 24-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2016
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Dear Oatmeal, thank you for your kind review.
I happened to take your advice, pulling up rhymezone.com, and it seems that both lights and flight are listed as rhymes to each other. Is there something I'm missing?
I appreciate your continued attention to my portfolio, and thanks again!
luna
Comment from mbroyles2
Another wonderful post.
I love the way you bring images alive with your free flowing rhymes.
"When it's time for the moon to rest,
the sun does what it knows the best;
rises high in the morning sky ~
"Awaken, birds, it's time to fly!"
Outstanding!
Love to read your work.
Michael
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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Another wonderful post.
I love the way you bring images alive with your free flowing rhymes.
"When it's time for the moon to rest,
the sun does what it knows the best;
rises high in the morning sky ~
"Awaken, birds, it's time to fly!"
Outstanding!
Love to read your work.
Michael
Comment Written 24-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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Thank you so much for this seriously gracious review. I truly appreciate your continued attention to my work.
Enjoy your day ☺️
Comment from dmt1967
This is such a cool poem and you had me hooked on fairies. I love these poems and wish there were more on here about them. I think you are becoming one of my favourite poets on here. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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This is such a cool poem and you had me hooked on fairies. I love these poems and wish there were more on here about them. I think you are becoming one of my favourite poets on here. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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I can't promise that Allot my poems will have fairies as the subject matter, but look for a good portion of them to. I appreciate your compliment!
Comment from Jackarrie
Hi
I love poems about the moon, and this is no exception. It is so heartwarming when the full moon lights up the earth even the house during the night.
Well done
Mary
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2016
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Hi
I love poems about the moon, and this is no exception. It is so heartwarming when the full moon lights up the earth even the house during the night.
Well done
Mary
Comment Written 24-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2016
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As a Cancer, to me, there is little else in my head but the moon. I'm happy that you enjoy poems about it too.
I appreciate your continued attention to my portfolio, and thanks again!
luna
Comment from Jumbo J
Hey Luna((((((((((((((... no one could deny, the female of our species has a far greater connection to the pull of the moon... while for me, I feel the power behind the glow and immerse myself in the splendor.
What a wonderful and lyrically rhymed poem... so enjoyed the innocence entwined in the story of... you sure do have a talent for your art... and of course, the divine help in the inspiration behind your motivation... Beautiful!
With our thoughts we create,
the cycle of eight-eternal.
James xv's.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2016
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Hey Luna((((((((((((((... no one could deny, the female of our species has a far greater connection to the pull of the moon... while for me, I feel the power behind the glow and immerse myself in the splendor.
What a wonderful and lyrically rhymed poem... so enjoyed the innocence entwined in the story of... you sure do have a talent for your art... and of course, the divine help in the inspiration behind your motivation... Beautiful!
With our thoughts we create,
the cycle of eight-eternal.
James xv's.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2016
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James, especially females born under the sign of Cancer, as I am! Your compliments and gracious words contained herein warm my heart.
blessed be
Comment from Dean Kuch
I would consider myself to be amongst those "Nocturnal Trekkers" of which you wrote about here in this lovely, well-rhymed poem, Luna.
I can't elaborate further as to why, but it isn't necessary.
Luna's lovely light does have a certainly...sil'vry, sublime allure, doesn't it? I much prefer night over day myself.
As for your reference to faeries, you wouldn't like the faeries I keep hanging around. I suppose one would refer to them as "sprites" instead.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2016
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I would consider myself to be amongst those "Nocturnal Trekkers" of which you wrote about here in this lovely, well-rhymed poem, Luna.
I can't elaborate further as to why, but it isn't necessary.
Luna's lovely light does have a certainly...sil'vry, sublime allure, doesn't it? I much prefer night over day myself.
As for your reference to faeries, you wouldn't like the faeries I keep hanging around. I suppose one would refer to them as "sprites" instead.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2016
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Dean, thanks for your review...I'm gonna pm you about this one!
Comment from Ulla
How wonderful is this poem where you are addressing each phase of the moon. There's a certain sense of humour I do like. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2016
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How wonderful is this poem where you are addressing each phase of the moon. There's a certain sense of humour I do like. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 23-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2016
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Thank you, Ulla,
for taking the time to read my work. I'm happy you caught the humour in the poem.
Always,
luna
