Comment from mbroyles2

Excellent

Your passion comes through so nicely.
You've taken the loss of your son and turned it into wonderful writing.
This free verse poem has clear imagery and a terrific pace.
I enjoy reading your work and wish you the best in the contest.
Michael

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 Comment Written 21-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016

I'm happy that you can feel passion in this poem. Thank you for enjoying my work and for the good luck wishes.