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Random Reflections.

Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Vision of a Blind Man"
Poems of Random wandering; an inward look.

5 total reviews 
Comment from djeckert
Exceptional
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very, cool and well said. There is only one race that matters and that is The human race. Color is irrellevant as your great write so neatly piints out well done. God Blesses

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2016


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
    Reading your words bring tears in my eyes. Why? Why we don't see our spiritual presence and focus on what our biodegradable bodies look like? I do not know but I sense it and hence this poem came about. Thanks for your comments and honor.
Comment from Poetic Friend
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If only people saw as you do, this world would be more bearable. People tend to made judgments by the color of one's skin, never getting to know the individual.

I can honestly say that when I am communicating with people, I don't see black or white. I am too busy listening to their words from the heart, regardless if those words are positive or negative.

Thank you for sharing your message. The world needs to read it.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2016


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
    I feel humbled by your words and message. We need to combat pettiness and educate those who do not see world from the spiritual aspect of humanity. Thanks for your review.
Comment from Cindy Warren
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Perhaps the world would be better off if we were all blind. Or perhaps all that is required is a return to common sense. Science tells us that we're not really different at all.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2016


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
    Cindy: You said it best. If only we get past our material world; we shall discover a spiritual one. Thanks for your encouraging comments.
Comment from Writer51
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This carries a very positive message. We don't have enough people with a blind attitude. You capture the strength of the subject in a short amount of words. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2016


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
    I was compelled to write because of feelings of divided we are overcoming my mind. I am just a scribe; words came from someone else who I feel is watching us all the time. Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Teri7
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I really like this poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with your art work. It would be a better world if people would see with their heart and not so much mind! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2016


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
    Words came to me by their own will when I, like all others, suffered the anxious moments generated by a nasty, undemocratic presidential contest. Divide and rule principle in use today in the 21st century made me sad and reflective. Poem formed naturally. Thanks for your review and comments.
reply by Teri7 on 21-Nov-2016
    you are so welcome! Teri
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
    Hope you will read other poems in my book Random Reflections available in my portfolio.