To Last Forever
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Life's Keepsake"Poems by Michael
20 total reviews
Comment from amada
Dear friend, congratulations in this, your poem, being qualified as one of the best of the month. I'm so happy I found you. I just love your eulogy to this mountain, haunting in its coldness. Best, dear Michael.
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Dear friend, congratulations in this, your poem, being qualified as one of the best of the month. I'm so happy I found you. I just love your eulogy to this mountain, haunting in its coldness. Best, dear Michael.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2016
Comment from WriteSins!
A really beautiful poem that shows how precious life and the people in it can be. The simple, but powerful word choice really completes the poem alongside it's message. Keep up the great work!
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A really beautiful poem that shows how precious life and the people in it can be. The simple, but powerful word choice really completes the poem alongside it's message. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2016
Comment from RGstar
Beautiful statements that ricochet and rebound, only to start again.
Clear thoughts written in your great cryptic style. Imagery in abundance.
Strong image to add to your theme.
Bravo.
Best wishes Michael.
RG
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Beautiful statements that ricochet and rebound, only to start again.
Clear thoughts written in your great cryptic style. Imagery in abundance.
Strong image to add to your theme.
Bravo.
Best wishes Michael.
RG
Comment Written 22-Nov-2016
Comment from Jumbo J
Hey Michael(((((((((((((... these magic words evoke of place of eternal gratefulness within the never-ending cycle of experiences... very haunting... and as usual you add that hit of music that always fit like a glove to rich'n the ride... so wonderfully composed my Brother!
With our thoughts we create,
memories that last.
James.
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Hey Michael(((((((((((((... these magic words evoke of place of eternal gratefulness within the never-ending cycle of experiences... very haunting... and as usual you add that hit of music that always fit like a glove to rich'n the ride... so wonderfully composed my Brother!
With our thoughts we create,
memories that last.
James.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2016
Comment from lancellot
Very serene and very well crafted. Each stanza seem to paint a scene of nature from different points of view but all with the same feel.
Well done.
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Very serene and very well crafted. Each stanza seem to paint a scene of nature from different points of view but all with the same feel.
Well done.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2016
Comment from KjSilver
This held a heartbeat of mine, grasped tightly around a moment in time. Let the sun rise, let it caress and blanket us, who we are, who we were. Standing by a burning maple as it rebels against the cold is foundational. Your poem inspires the truth at heart.
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This held a heartbeat of mine, grasped tightly around a moment in time. Let the sun rise, let it caress and blanket us, who we are, who we were. Standing by a burning maple as it rebels against the cold is foundational. Your poem inspires the truth at heart.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2016
Comment from trumby
Lovely poem, mate. I love the image used, good choice and arrangements of words too. I love this lines especially :
follow through goes round and round
eternal bends & never ends
over and over again begins
Well done. Thanks for sharing.
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Lovely poem, mate. I love the image used, good choice and arrangements of words too. I love this lines especially :
follow through goes round and round
eternal bends & never ends
over and over again begins
Well done. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2016
Comment from Leineco
remnant mementos
never unshackle;
memory forges
intricate fretwork -
arabesque
courtyards
lit
by dawn's breaking sunlight...
chainmaille
enchantment
-<>--
shadows and echoes
indelible
portraits
ever revolving
pattern
unending
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
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remnant mementos
never unshackle;
memory forges
intricate fretwork -
arabesque
courtyards
lit
by dawn's breaking sunlight...
chainmaille
enchantment
-<>--
shadows and echoes
indelible
portraits
ever revolving
pattern
unending
Comment Written 21-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
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ah but who really forgets...
not continuous but indwelling none the less
yes all is until end of tunnel lights
perhaps but even more special is love lettered mail
we all have ghosts who haunt the innermost places
eternal is the spirits experience.
I love that song....her...my beautiful F-up man...is one of my favorites. Anyway....you know I was thinking....hey...where ya going...Leinko....Hey...cmere...what..the...love you Michael
Comment from Writer51
I can feel the curves and the bends in this poem. It's quite effective especially toward the end. The pace is in a good twist, too. Thanks for sharing.
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I can feel the curves and the bends in this poem. It's quite effective especially toward the end. The pace is in a good twist, too. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2016
Comment from Giggles0630
Perfect choice of words and order of words. Reading your poem felt like dancing a waltz in a majestic mountain setting in a dream. A poem that transports the reader to a wonderful place.
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Perfect choice of words and order of words. Reading your poem felt like dancing a waltz in a majestic mountain setting in a dream. A poem that transports the reader to a wonderful place.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2016
