Comment from Heidi M

Excellent

It is so good to read of all the things you are able to do, in spite of MS. I know you appreciate being able to move around and go places.
One small suggestion for you to consider:
They (are) so happy to see me -Change 'were' to 'are' so it is consistent present tense with the rest of the sentence
That's a bunch of kitty cats to keep up with, by the way!
Have a wonderful Thanksgiving!

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016

Thank you so much for the great review and help. I do get mixed up with tense at times. They are so adorable and like family now. had them along time. Happy Thanksgiving! Teri

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Teri

= I think is is awesome how well you do with your MS.
= A strong constitution, and some help with the Fella upstairs, we can do far more than we know.
= Thanks for sharing your story, my friend.

= Happy Thanksgiving to all who celebrate!
= Those who don't, I bid you a great day/evening. (*<*)

<> A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*>*)
<> Cheers & Blessings <> Jax
<> Published as <> Jacqueline M Franklin

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016

Thank you Jax for the great review! Blessings, Teri

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Teresa,

I like the little story you wrote. It was fun to read and also that I learned more things about you.

It is perfectly written except for the last line in the first paragraph of your writing.
The last line says: "where the cats waiting to be fed". I think you should add the word "are" waiting to be fed. Or you could say " where the cats "wait" to be fed.

Kat

Kat

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016

Thank you for the great review and help! I will fix that! love, Teresa

reply by MizKat on 21-Nov-2016

I'm glad that you don't mind when I tell you about little mistakes you make. I hope you'll do it for me too. Kat

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Ha, ha. I think you are like me with the rescued pets. I think I count seven kitties. I've had as many as four dogs and four cats at one time and believe it or not the household was a joy and ran smoothly. Now I live with one ex-husband who requires a lot of healthcare and my house is constantly in chaos. Go figure. I guess God puts us where we are needed the most. I enjoyed reading this. Marilyn

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016

lol That is so very true my friend! There are many things in my life that are not perfect, but I am thankful for the things that go really well. Blessings to you my friend! Teri

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

I didn't find it boring at all, Teri. I enjoyed learning more about your Saturdays. You get up very early!
Thanks for sharing this.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016

Thank you my friend! Have a blessed day! Teri

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

It's never boring to read about happy times and all that we have to be thankful. I just everyone would take the positives and try to enjoy them best they can. If we don't, it won't take long for the negatives to bring us completely down. Thanks for another fine read. :-)

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016

Thank you Ric for the great review. That is so true my friend. We do have so much to be thankful for and sometimes we don't even realize it! Have a blessed day! Teri

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

You have cats, my favorite subject.
You have faith, my favorite subject.
You have pain, my subject but I can realte to.
You have adventure, my yearning for.
You have love of a man, I hope someday to have.
What more could I want to read dear friend

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016

Thank you so much Barb for the great review! Glad we are kind of alike in so many ways! love you, Teri

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Teri,

Is that a picture of you and Tom up there?

I think this was a neat piece. It's great to know you can get out and about. I have a friend with MS who is house-bound, so I love hearing that you are able to do so much! Fabulous!

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016

Yes Robin that is the only recent picture I had of Tom and I on here. It's a bit blurry, but I hope it serves the purpose. I am so thankful for all I can do. My middle son wants me and my younger son, who has MS also, to participate in a study that will hopefully help others coming aboard with MS, and those that have had it for a while too. Please say a prayer that something good will come out of it for all MS patients. It's not a nice disease! Thanks for the great review. Blessings, Teri

Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Teri,

I'm glad you shared this diary-like post.
You are generous to volunteer your time
to the church and I liked hearing about
all your cats and their attributes.

You did a good job. I just 2 minor things:

"First, I go in Curious and Precious room."
(you need an apostrophe at the end of those names...
I think or state it like this:
First, I went into the room where Curious and Precious hang out"

I'm glad to hear this:

"He brought me back from being not able to go to*(?) enjoying my life again"

I'm just wondering if you meant to have the word *(church) there?

Love,
Linda

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016

Thank you my friend! I did mean church among other things I can do now that I couldn't for that 5-6 year period. I will look for those mistakes and fix them. I hope you and Willie have a very blessed Sunday! love you, Teri

reply by AnnaLinda on 20-Nov-2016

Thank God and you too!

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Serving the Lord can be with menial tasks. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016

Thank you Charlie! I hope you have a very blessed day! Blessings, Teri