Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Lovers"a place to gather my poetic forms
20 total reviews
Comment from AnnaLinda
Luna,
Your double etheree must have been a very tearful task.
Again, I'm so sorry for your loss. This is a very touching
poem to say the least.
Your form is excellent and the message impacting.
Maybe it can help someone from meeting Mickey's
plight. We can hope and pray it will.
These lines really touched my heart
deeply and are outstanding in every way:
"Your demons, inner turmoil ruled your days.
Attempts to recover gave me hope,
I loved you more than my own life.
Your last time was your last time;"
God bless and thank you for sharing,
Linda
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
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Luna,
Your double etheree must have been a very tearful task.
Again, I'm so sorry for your loss. This is a very touching
poem to say the least.
Your form is excellent and the message impacting.
Maybe it can help someone from meeting Mickey's
plight. We can hope and pray it will.
These lines really touched my heart
deeply and are outstanding in every way:
"Your demons, inner turmoil ruled your days.
Attempts to recover gave me hope,
I loved you more than my own life.
Your last time was your last time;"
God bless and thank you for sharing,
Linda
Comment Written 20-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
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Thank you, Linda. I'm grateful for the support.
Comment from Kai Michael Neumann
I can relate to this very much and it touches my emotional core. 'The female lover' notion is brilliant sad and necessary to uphold in your heart and for others to understand the terror of drugs. I am sorry for your plight and send you many wishes, Kai
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
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I can relate to this very much and it touches my emotional core. 'The female lover' notion is brilliant sad and necessary to uphold in your heart and for others to understand the terror of drugs. I am sorry for your plight and send you many wishes, Kai
Comment Written 20-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
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Dear Kai, I appreciate your thoughts about this poem...I really enjoyed reading this review. Thank you for the condolences. I appreciate you.
Comment from robyn corum
Jeni,
I can't even begin to imagine what you've been through. I have a nephew who's been addicted to heroin and that's hard enough, but my baby...? no way. I'm sending prayers for you now. God bless.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
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Jeni,
I can't even begin to imagine what you've been through. I have a nephew who's been addicted to heroin and that's hard enough, but my baby...? no way. I'm sending prayers for you now. God bless.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
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Thank you for your very kind review.
I appreciate your kind attention to my work of yours soon. Sorry for the late reply, I've been out of town due to a death in the family.
Comment from Heather Knight
Even though I read about you and your son yesterday, reading this poem breaks my heart again. I cannot begin to imagine how you feel.
Thanks for sharing this lovely tribute, Jeni.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
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Even though I read about you and your son yesterday, reading this poem breaks my heart again. I cannot begin to imagine how you feel.
Thanks for sharing this lovely tribute, Jeni.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
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Thank you for your very kind review.
I appreciate your kind attention to my work of yours soon. Sorry for the late reply, I've been out of town due to a death in the family.
Comment from Bill O'Bier
I'm so sorry for your loss - but so appreciate your sharing this poem. We all need to be made aware of addiction disease and work to dedicate more resources for it treatment and prevention.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
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I'm so sorry for your loss - but so appreciate your sharing this poem. We all need to be made aware of addiction disease and work to dedicate more resources for it treatment and prevention.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
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Thank you for your very kind review.
I appreciate your kind attention to my work of yours soon. Sorry for the late reply, I've been out of town due to a death in the family.
Comment from sanejane
I write this to you, Jeni, not to Luna. It was you who suffered this most terrible loss. Messages like this are hard to write, because I want to rage against that whore, heroin. But it's not a whore; it's just a mindless drug which has brought about a pandemic; the disease of addiction, to which your son fell victim.
When your child is an addict, you suffer so many losses, so many small deaths. Each time hope returns, only to be dashed again. Your hope has ben stolen away for the final time, and I am so sorry for your ultimate loss. May the knowledge that he is now at peace, give you some relief from your torment.
Now to your poem. It is beautiful. More than that, it is another warning to those who are vulnerable and ready to experiment.
I regret I have no sixes left.
My heart goes out to you. Sending my love for one who has been pulled yet further into the darkness than I.
Jane
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
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I write this to you, Jeni, not to Luna. It was you who suffered this most terrible loss. Messages like this are hard to write, because I want to rage against that whore, heroin. But it's not a whore; it's just a mindless drug which has brought about a pandemic; the disease of addiction, to which your son fell victim.
When your child is an addict, you suffer so many losses, so many small deaths. Each time hope returns, only to be dashed again. Your hope has ben stolen away for the final time, and I am so sorry for your ultimate loss. May the knowledge that he is now at peace, give you some relief from your torment.
Now to your poem. It is beautiful. More than that, it is another warning to those who are vulnerable and ready to experiment.
I regret I have no sixes left.
My heart goes out to you. Sending my love for one who has been pulled yet further into the darkness than I.
Jane
Comment Written 19-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
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Thank you so much for the lovely review. It is very in touch with the horror of addiction. I'm glad that you understand.
I appreciate you.
Blessed be
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I wrote that message on a difficult day, and my words came out stilted and unnatural, but the meaning behind them was sincere x
Comment from starkat
Hey Jeni - Remember me? We had a collaborative work in the works called -
"Catch a Falling Star" done in La Tuin poetry form. Chapter 1, 'The Wizard' posted 08/30/07, is still in my portfolio and easily accessed through Classic Fanstory. This newfangled Fanstory will take some time to get used to. The introduction to "Catch a Falling Star" was in your portfolio. If you have a copy of it, it would be wonderful if you could repost it. We met and had coffee in Maryland while I was back there for my nephew's wedding. Anyway, glad to see that you've returned! Look forwards to your continued growth as a talented writer.
Sorry to hear about Mickey - very sad - you were in turmoil about his issues when we met a decade ago.
This is a perfectly written double etheree about your deep love for Mickey, and the issues involved with heroin addiction that finally took his life.
Love the artwork!
Outstanding job with this double etheree.
Best of luck with the contest.
Cheers ... ;o) Art
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
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Hey Jeni - Remember me? We had a collaborative work in the works called -
"Catch a Falling Star" done in La Tuin poetry form. Chapter 1, 'The Wizard' posted 08/30/07, is still in my portfolio and easily accessed through Classic Fanstory. This newfangled Fanstory will take some time to get used to. The introduction to "Catch a Falling Star" was in your portfolio. If you have a copy of it, it would be wonderful if you could repost it. We met and had coffee in Maryland while I was back there for my nephew's wedding. Anyway, glad to see that you've returned! Look forwards to your continued growth as a talented writer.
Sorry to hear about Mickey - very sad - you were in turmoil about his issues when we met a decade ago.
This is a perfectly written double etheree about your deep love for Mickey, and the issues involved with heroin addiction that finally took his life.
Love the artwork!
Outstanding job with this double etheree.
Best of luck with the contest.
Cheers ... ;o) Art
Comment Written 19-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
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Art! First of all, thank you a whole bunch for the generous six-star review. That makes me so happy.
Of course I remember you, how could I now? I'm trying to access classic Fanstory but don't know how. I've gotta write to tom.
I propose that we collaborate on a work very shortly. It was so much fun working with you.
I'm glad that you reached out to me, and I thank you for your condolences.
Hope to hear from you soon!
Jeni
Comment from rjuselius
i am so sorry for your loss dear jeni! nevertheless welcome back with such a strong and powerful piece of poetry! i used to do drugs but have been clean for 14 years, i can relate to your son's addiction.
thank you for sharing this delicate poem!
virtual six..
blessings!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
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i am so sorry for your loss dear jeni! nevertheless welcome back with such a strong and powerful piece of poetry! i used to do drugs but have been clean for 14 years, i can relate to your son's addiction.
thank you for sharing this delicate poem!
virtual six..
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 19-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
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Dear Rebekka, congratulations on your 14 years, It's a miracle. I appreciate your condolences and that you enjoyed (if that's the right word) my poem.
Love,
Jeni
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Heroin is the evilest of all drugs. My son-in-law died from a heroin overdose. He left behind my daughter and three beautiful children.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
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Heroin is the evilest of all drugs. My son-in-law died from a heroin overdose. He left behind my daughter and three beautiful children.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
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I'm so sorry for your loss. It truly is tragic. My son left behind a mother, father, sister and grandmother who loved him to the moon and back. He is truly our angel. Again, I weep for your loss.
Truly,
Jeni
Comment from dragonpoet
This tells well of his struggle and loss to the battle with drugs. It also shows of your love.
I am sorry for your loss. Holidays are hard because of the memories. Enjoy these holidays.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2016
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This tells well of his struggle and loss to the battle with drugs. It also shows of your love.
I am sorry for your loss. Holidays are hard because of the memories. Enjoy these holidays.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 18-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2016
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Dear Joan, I thank you for your continued attention to my work.
Your pen name is familiar to me. Did I know you when I was on the site before?
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No problem. You may have, I've been on the site since 2007.
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