Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Wow! I did not see that coming. You kept me on edge from the start to the finish. It was full of great descriptive wording and great imagery with your words. Great job. hugs, Teri

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2016

Thanks for reading, Teri. Have a nice day.

Comment from valmay

Excellent

I would be really happy with this story if I could be reassured Sue got away with it. There was plenty of dialogue to keep the story moving and the characters were believable. A great ending.

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 Comment Written 16-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2016

I do hope she will get away with it. At least that's the way I've imagined it.
Thanks for reading.

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

OH dear so well done and I knew there had to be a kick at the end.
No problems noted and I love the visit to the phychiatrist because when I went, mine fell asleep.lol

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 Comment Written 16-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2016

Unbelievable!
Thanks for reading, Barb.