Comment from heyjude

Excellent

Yvonne, nicely done. I'm glad Wally the Weasel could teach the
young weasels about painting. Most of I'm glad they painted
from their hearts. Looking forward to hearing more about Wally's
painting class.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016

Thank you. I appreciate your interest very much. 8-)

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

I wish I had a 6 left, Yvonne, that was superb. I love children's poetry, and read a lot of it. This one is an excellent way of teaching young children how to paint a picture, drawing lines to start and from those, a whole world of pictures can be created. I love Wally, he's a cutie! Excellent, my friend. :) Sandra

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016

Thank you so much. Your lovely comments mean more than any six.

I'm going to go over the old Wally stories. They need punching up. I'm going to try to get them published. A lot of people have suggested that.

Thank you, again, dear friend. 8-)

Comment from Nottoway

Exceptional

Beautiful! Beautiful!

What a beautiful story. You so beautifully personified Wally and set him abouton a mission that was just as beautifully important. I could imagine the little ones at rap attention and making a beautiful mess as they also created their art.

Magnificent and deserving of the accolades.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016

How sweet and wonderful is this review! I can't say how much I appreciate it. Thank you so much!!!

Comment from Writer51

Excellent

It's nice to read something so innocent and meant for children. Whatever it takes, it's always comforting to escape all of the dirt and smut of things today. Thanks for the happy feeling.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016

Thank you for this lovely compliment. I'm so happy you enjoyed it. 8-)

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This little story poem is sooooo delightful, Yvonne. I enjoyed
reading it immensely. It's fun and playful. Has a good message
for kids of all ages that creating our own rendition of art is a
rewarding venture. Let's all go paint now! Marilyn

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016

Oh, I'm so glad you liked it. I'm surprised how some people here have taken to him and followed him all along. I'm going to edit all of the stories, and put them on CreateSpace. I can see how I improved some as I went along. Still lots of room for that, though. LOL.

Thank you so much. I'm happy you liked Wally. 8-)

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Yvonne, this is a wonderful children's story...I love how Wally went to teach the little weasels how to paint...and I love the way you described them getting ready...this is so sweet you...so very nicely written...and yes...I love the picture...love ya Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2016

Thank you so much, sweet girl. I always enjoy your reviews. They make me feel so good. 8-)

reply by l.raven on 16-Nov-2016

your so welcome sweetie...always...xxoo Love

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is about my favorite little weasel and I did miss these poems about him so much. Glad you wrote this one.

His brought his paints and palette,
Did you mean to say He brought?

I am truly glad Wally came back for this write. Very good wording and imagery. hugs, Teri

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2016

Yes, I did. I'll change it now.

Thank you on Wally's behalf. He's glad to be back and hear from his friends. 8-)

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

This is delightful. It was actually like teaching an art class to juniors as I remember it. And you had to be carefull the little blighters didn't make a terrible mess. I could have done with wally's assitance back in those days.

Even the forced rhymes are fun. Q. Why was the cleaning cup green? A. Because it has to rhyme with "unseen". Lol.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2016

Thanks for reviewing.

No, because from his past stories, EVERYONE knows his cup is green. LOL.

Which rhymes seem forced?

reply by Pantygynt on 17-Nov-2016

Everyone but me I suppose. I had forgotten its colour. That was the only forced rhyme anyway but if it was already established as being green it wasn't forced either. If it it had been stated as green purely to rhyme with unseen then it would have been but it wasn't so it isn't (raps knuckles).

reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016

Awwww, you're half-right. It wasn't established in the current poem, so I guess it does seem forced. I hadn't thought of that. I was teasing you about everyone being in the know. 8-)

As always, thank you for looking out for me.

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Wally,

I am so happy to see that you are back again. I have really missed you. I always look forward to learning more about your teachings and I'm glad that you are willing to show all of us more about them.

I'm glad that you told us to paint from our hearts, which has been a big help to me. I noticed that most of us have learned a lot from it and have decided to keep learning more.

Thanks Wally for all of your help and for being willing to continue helping us. You are the greatest!

Kat

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2016

You're such a sweet lady. Sorry it took me so long to get back. Thank you. Love, Wally.

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

This is a fun poem-story. It would be ideal for children. Had you written about Wally before?
And have you painted the picture yourself?
Very enjoyable. Thanks.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2016

Yes, Wally has many stories. At the top of the page, you will see his chapters listed.

Thank you for such a nice review. Yes, Wally does his own artwork. LOL.