Luna's Form Poetry
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20 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This sounds like a love poem to you from your better half. It is a well writtten pantoum which flows well and seems to say he feels the muse you use has not helped youu much lately. A little bit of writer's cramp
Joan
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This sounds like a love poem to you from your better half. It is a well writtten pantoum which flows well and seems to say he feels the muse you use has not helped youu much lately. A little bit of writer's cramp
Joan
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
It's good that she's back. I awoke mine about a week ago. I'm trying to keep her going but she went crazy last week and I posted more last week than I probably have all year. Great job
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
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It's good that she's back. I awoke mine about a week ago. I'm trying to keep her going but she went crazy last week and I posted more last week than I probably have all year. Great job
Comment Written 17-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
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I'm sorry this reply to your kind review is so late. I've just returned from Philadelphia dealing with the loss of my dear sister-in-law. I hope you understand.
Again, thank you for the review!
Comment from mermaids
A feeling of fantasy and going to another realm comes through clearly in your words. The repeating line "a magic carpet takes her there" adds to the feel of fantasy and is a clear image of your muse in action.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2016
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A feeling of fantasy and going to another realm comes through clearly in your words. The repeating line "a magic carpet takes her there" adds to the feel of fantasy and is a clear image of your muse in action.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2016
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Dear mermaids,
Thank you for your review. I'm sorry that it's taken me so long to respond. I am out of town at my sister - in - laws deathbed. We're having to pull this plug tomorrow due to her wishes. Please understand if I don't answer reviews right away for a short period of time. ❤️❤️❤️
Comment from barleygirl
In many cases, I don't like poetic forms that require repetition becuz it often sounds like lines are being repeated in a rather mechanical way. But the highest compliment for me is when a poet uses required repetition & makes it sound organic, like you've done here. This message flows from top to bottom without any notice of the many poetic gyrations needed & described in your author's notes (WHEW!) Excellent crafting effort!
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
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In many cases, I don't like poetic forms that require repetition becuz it often sounds like lines are being repeated in a rather mechanical way. But the highest compliment for me is when a poet uses required repetition & makes it sound organic, like you've done here. This message flows from top to bottom without any notice of the many poetic gyrations needed & described in your author's notes (WHEW!) Excellent crafting effort!
Comment Written 17-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
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Thanks, barleygirl, for your lovely review. I'm really happy that you enjoyed my poem and I thank you for your attention to my work!
Blessed be
Comment from AnnaLinda
Luna...Welcome Back!
I did read your profile comments and send you
my sincere condolences for the loss of your son,
Mickey. Thanks for picking yourself back up
and sharing your talent with us again.
I opted to not read all of your author notes
on the form and just enjoy your well written
phantoum poem. (my brain can't take all that
work:)
Your poem was enjoyable to read. It has
lovely imagery and a strong entry and ending
line...a nice match with your pen name.
You also have some great alliteration
and another strong repeating line with:
"My Muse is beautiful and kind"
I see that,
Linda
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016
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Luna...Welcome Back!
I did read your profile comments and send you
my sincere condolences for the loss of your son,
Mickey. Thanks for picking yourself back up
and sharing your talent with us again.
I opted to not read all of your author notes
on the form and just enjoy your well written
phantoum poem. (my brain can't take all that
work:)
Your poem was enjoyable to read. It has
lovely imagery and a strong entry and ending
line...a nice match with your pen name.
You also have some great alliteration
and another strong repeating line with:
"My Muse is beautiful and kind"
I see that,
Linda
Comment Written 17-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016
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Dear Linda, I want to thank you for your condolences and encouragement. I appreciated that you noticed the alliteration and enjoyed the repeating line. ❤️ ❤️
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My pleasure.
Comment from William Ross
Very good, nicely done on the pantoum on Luna and the moon, works out very well. I have a niece named Luna. Thanks for the share and have a great day.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016
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Very good, nicely done on the pantoum on Luna and the moon, works out very well. I have a niece named Luna. Thanks for the share and have a great day.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016
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Dear William,
Tell your niece that I adore her name.
thank you for your kind and thoughtful review of my poem. I hope to see you again soon. ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Comment from rjuselius
This is a beautiful piece of poetry,dear luna! I just love everything mythical or fantasy. I thoroughly enjoyed your writing my friend!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings!!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016
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This is a beautiful piece of poetry,dear luna! I just love everything mythical or fantasy. I thoroughly enjoyed your writing my friend!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings!!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 17-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016
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Dear Rebekka,
If you enjoy everything mythical and fantasy, we definitely have something in common.
thank you for your kind and thoughtful review of my poem. I hope to see you again soon. ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Comment from crybry67
I learn something new every day here. That's a very interesting form I've not seen before. You did it well, I think it flows smoothly, excellent rhyme and rhythm.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016
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I learn something new every day here. That's a very interesting form I've not seen before. You did it well, I think it flows smoothly, excellent rhyme and rhythm.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016
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Thank you for your kind and thoughtful review of my poem. I hope to see you again soon. ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Comment from Irish Rain
I LOVE this!!! Wish I had six stars left, most deserving. That line, 'I woke with Luna on my mind', REALLY stands out at the end!! I love this, blessings...
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
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I LOVE this!!! Wish I had six stars left, most deserving. That line, 'I woke with Luna on my mind', REALLY stands out at the end!! I love this, blessings...
Comment Written 16-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
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Thank you once again for a truly lovely review, Irish Rain. I appreciate your attention to my work.
I'm sorry this reply to your kind review is so late. I've just returned from Philadelphia dealing with the loss of my dear sister-in-law. I hope you understand.
Again, thank you for the review!
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Another excellently rhymed poem. Your style is easy to recognize. You write with simplicity and clarity. It makes your poems very easy and enjoyable to read.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
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Another excellently rhymed poem. Your style is easy to recognize. You write with simplicity and clarity. It makes your poems very easy and enjoyable to read.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
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I'm sorry this reply to your kind review is so late. I've just returned from Philadelphia dealing with the loss of my dear sister-in-law. I hope you understand.
Again, thank you for the review!
