Comment from pit viper

Exceptional

This actually held my attention, and few stories do. Very good, smooth writing, interesting topic. There are a few places where you forgot to capitalize the first letter of the sentence... a few places where you could've left a space between sentences. All in all, it did not detract. Good job.

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2016

Dear P.V. (Now there's a Nom de Plume!) Thank you for your review of my story "Megan" and the awesome SIX stars. I will go back and look through it for the points you raise, and I really appreciate you telling me of them. My typing is not the best although I have progressed past the "hunt and peck" method, so there are faults in what I post. We do intend to persevere though, and hopefully reach a point where it will no longer be a problem. Thanks again cheers Cass

Comment from winnona

Exceptional

A very well-written contest entry. Your well-chosen words flowed easily from beginning to end as the story moved right along. your added details and realistic characters brought the story to life for me as I read it.

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2016

Dear Winnona, thank you for your review of my story "Megan" and the awesome SIX stars. This is a story I'd been working on for some time and when I looked at the contest requirements I realized that with adding another line of dialogue I had a fitting entry.
Thanks again cheers Cass