Comment from Richard J

Excellent

Hi, Dallas!
I voted for this one because it made the most sense, for the truth in the message, and keen appeal of the artistic layout/presentation.
Plus, it's the title of my book ... LOL!
I ordered yours, BTW, and found it to be a stellar read ... thank you.

Kudos on the nice win!
Seems others agreed, eh? ~ Richard : )

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016

Thank you for the support.

reply by Richard J on 18-Nov-2016

How could I not? : )

reply by Richard J on 20-Nov-2016

Ya betcha! : )

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

THIS IS ELOQUENT AND WITTY. SATIRICAL TOO LOVE THE EDGINESS.

oops caps lock--didn't meant to shout!

This has a potent punch in the closing line and I love the use of grimy with intent. Fine alliteration of soft I and assonance of hard I as well


This is unique and very effective!

Strong contender for my vote.

Warmly, r d

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2016

Thanks for the stellar review. r d. Appreciate it.

reply by rama devi on 13-Nov-2016

:-)))

Comment from lucky linda

Excellent

I found your poem very thought provoking and you show how vile innuendos can be. It made me feel sad, that we need to remind each other of this fact. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2016

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from winnona

Excellent

A well written writing prompt entry. Your words flowed well combining easily and forming the message o the poem for the reader. I think you completed the challenge of the prompt well.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2016

Thank you for the kind review.