Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a fine entry for the haiku contest
in the 5-7-5 syllable form
Nice imagery in the sea meeting shore
and personification with the sound of sea "singing"
Excellent reflective satori line
the relaxing sound of the waves
Excellent poem
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2016

Thanks for you generous comments and good wishes.
Thanks Jax

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

"The sea meets the shore
Singing continually
Cerebral repose"
for a haiku, capitalizing letters is frowned upon. the poem itself is very original and the satori is rather clever. this should do well for its uniqueness.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2016

Thanks for you clear and positive comments. I made the edit and also thank you for that.
Jax
It's to be blessed Thanks

Comment from royowen

Excellent

A really good take in this haiku poetry contest. The theme is an unusual one and the satori is a really good one, a left field gem, I rather like your chances, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016

Thanks for your kind words and positive comments. the blessing too.
Jax

reply by royowen on 13-Nov-2016

Most welcome

Comment from mvbrooks

Excellent

This haiku has a peaceful sense with words like "meets" and "singing continually" and gives a sense of a soft, rolling tide and rhythmic wave sounds evoking a restful feeling. Meets line and syllable count.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016

I am glad you enjoyed it and please it evoked a restful moment.
Thanks Jax

Comment from Bill O'Bier

Excellent

A creative entry for this contest- The arrangement of your words are expressive.Thanks for sharing this piece.

Wishing you all the best...
Bill

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016

Thanks Bill These are fun. I hope I can get the hang of them. I have bought a few books on them and it seems there is quite discrepancy as to what they should be. Some on them just leave me scratching my head. Thanks for the good wishes
Jax

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

And what a beautiful, magical song it is, promising enchantment! This is a most lovely haiku, best of luck in this contest, blessings...

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016

Thanks for the review and kind comments.
Jax

Comment from djsaxon

Excellent

Love it. This evokes memories of a childhood (mine) living beachside. The sound of the waves breaking on the shore was way past awesome. I referred to it as a 'mental enema' best for the contest - DJ

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016

Thanks for the Interesting comments. I am glad I evoked a pleasant memory. Thanks Jax

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

A very good entry in the contest. You should do well.
A friend showed me a poem he wrote. He said it was Haiku. It was eighteen stanzas long.

I told him it wasn't Haiku.

He said, "yes it is. A guy in a bar told me."

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2016

They can be multi stanzas. I have seen them on this site and I checked the net. just ask Siri ;the computer lady in the phone. Thanks for the review
Jax

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I like the mood you created with this 5-7-5 haiku and easily could visualize the scene. Your use of alliteration accentuated the message. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2016

Thanks so much for your kind words and good wishes.
Jax

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well worded haiku you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2016

Thanks so much for your review and good wishes
Jax