Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Exceptional

Oh, Judy, your haiku is BEAUTIFUL!!! The best one in this contest for sure. You have my vote.

You were only allowed one piece of art for this contest and you used it well, it is a gorgeous picture. I love it! But it is not necessary to get the concrete imagery from your well-chosen words.

Traditional 5/7/5 syllabic count, an awesome connection between lines one and two, extraordinary satori full of imagery and emotion.

The only suggestion I have is to change the font to white. Black font is hard to read on a dark background. I would make the font bigger for the old folks, like me. LOL (let me know if you want help with that technical stuff).

Well done, sweetie pie, I am proud of you!

Gypsy

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2016

The six stars and encouraging review means so much coming from you. I learn and improve every day on this site.... plus find clever friends like you. Thanks my sweet gypsy, love Judy

reply by Gypsy Blue Rose on 14-Nov-2016

You are welcomed, sweetie pie.

Gypsy

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

What a Neato picture indeed and an Absolutley fantastic piece of writing to go with. Way to go and best of wishes at judging time. A plus.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2016

Thanks for the encouraging review. I hope that you are doing fine these days, cheers, j

reply by foxangie123 on 13-Nov-2016

Doing better. Xo

Comment from winnona

Excellent

a well written contest entry,I think you did well completing the challenge of the contest. Your words flowed well combining and forming the message of the poem fo r the reader.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016

Thanks for the review .I love that first snow fall, cheers, j

Comment from Rhonni

Excellent

Very beautiful piece about going into the winter. I love the words you used and with such a short poem, the image is still very vivid. Creative and peaceful, thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2016

I always love that first snowfall when autumn meets winter, thanks for the review, cheers, j

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is a great entry for the contest. Good job on the syllable count. Your lines meet the criteria of the haiku.

The art/image is awesome.

Good job & best wishes in the contest.

I will be looking for this in the booth.

Jan

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2016

Thanks for the encouraging review. I always love it when autumn blends with winter. Cheers, j