Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

I love the alliteration you use in these haiku's. In such a short verse they have even more impact I think than in the longer forms. Varcolac look like he has the irits up, great artwork.
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017

Thanks very much for reading and following along with our story, Valda.
Both Gypsy Blue Rose and myself certainly do appreciate it.


~Dean

Comment from frierajac

Exceptional

this is a scream. Meaning also very funny I could listen for hours. I waited to get you a 6. I only wonder how on earth you have all this in this little space, Are there classes on fan story on how to add music and such?

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2016

No, unfortunately there aren't any classes here at FanStory for that sort of thing but I'd be willing to teach you myself if you like.
Do you have a photobucket.com account? It's totally free and costs nothing more than your email.
Here's a link to my library in case you're interested in checking it out for yourself.
Dean's Bucket.
Oh, and thanks so much for following along with this story told in hora haiku, frierajac. I truly appreciate you kind supprt and generous six stars.
Warmest regards,
~Dean :}

reply by frierajac on 13-Nov-2016

I would like to learn. I tried Dean's Bucket and the
mac won't do it. I will look for photo bucket and get back to you on this

reply by the author on 13-Nov-2016

Fair enough.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Exceptional

Dean,
This is an awesome presentation. The art is perfect & scary. The colored text is fitting--the red blood- dripping letters add to the overall effect. I like the alliteration & the addition of the music. To read this poem without all that I have written would be a good experience. However, all of the additions make it an awesome one & highlight the fact that your aim is to entertain readers. You always give it your best & this one exemplifies that artistic talent you have. The words themselves are super; but, the added 'things' complete the whole poem making it an experience.

Supermoon on November 14. What will happen to all the werewolves then? Love the 'Werewolves of London' song.

Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2016

Comment from Bill O'Bier

Excellent

Your words are fun and clever. A wonderful poem my friend. Thanks for sharing this fun piece.

Wishing you all the best...
Bill

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2016

Thanks very much for taking the time to comment on this, Bill.
Regards...
~Dean

Comment from Alan K Pease

Excellent

A truely evil creature - spawn of the night and foster child of Dracula who feasts on his cries in the night. Excellent Haiku chapter in the horrors of evil hopefully disposessed.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2016

Thanks for following along with our story, Alan.
Both my co-author, Gypsy Blue Rose, and I sincerely appreciate the fact that you do.
Take care,
~Dean

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Dean, I may never look on midnight the same way again. Ok you got my heart rate up and though this is perfectly penned it has imagery that screams off the page. Or perhaps that was me screaming. Just read Robyns killer poem, I was already done in I think. Yikes.
This one bleeds off the page my friend.
Thanks for giving me a new image on midnight....I think.
mo

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2016

Thanks for following along with our story, Mo.
Both my co-author, Gypsy Blue Rose, and I sincerely appreciate the fact that you do.
Take care,
~Dean

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Now THAT is a scary picture! Will the pictures be included in your book? Love your haiku too Mr. Dean, always interesting to see what this tale has in store next for Claudiu and Mirela....blessings...

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2016

Thanks for following along with our story, Judy.
Both my co-author, Gypsy Blue Rose, and I sincerely appreciate the fact that you do.
Take care,
~Dean

Comment from Jim Lorson Sr

Excellent

Dean, this is an excellent haiku chapter! I love the artwork that truly brings your words to life!

I'm going to miss reading your postings because by the end of this month, I will no longer be on Fanstory! I'm going through some help issues that has my mind somewhat muddled. I wish you good luck with your future endeavours my friend,,,,,,, Jim

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2016

Awwww, Jim? You're not really leaving, are you?
Man, you and I go way back here on FanStory.
Well, if you feel you have to leave FanStory I'm sure you have a very good reason.
I'll sure hate to see you go, my friend.
You'll be sorely missed.
Take care, Jim, and God bless...

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

Another fine scream in the form of Hora haiku
excellent imagery and connection for the form
present tense and a solid satori line
plus some good old fashion alliteration
Excellent presentation of the red moon
and "dripping" font
Well done, this should be quite a book when complete
You'll have to change your name to
Dean Crimson Kuch

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2016

Thanks for checking out our latest chapter and for following along with the story, Robert.
Gypsy and I certainly appreciate it.
Take care,
~Dean

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Good graphics, presentation, and font choice.
-Effective imagery and the alliteration adds to the effect.
-There is an effective connection between Varcolac and "Luna's radiance."
-The satori brings it all together very well.
-Thanks for sharing and continuing the project.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2016

Hello, Pam.
Both Gypsy Blue Rose and I certainly appreciate you taking the time to read our latest chapter of this Gothic love/horror story written strictly in contemporary haiku poetry.
Much obliged.
~Dean

reply by Pam (respa) on 10-Nov-2016

You are quite welcome, Dean.