Jealous
2-4-2 entry17 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
A very good entry into the contest. Your 2-4-2 is straightforward and true. Illustration follows theme. No one can quibble with jealousy and
being green with envy. Marilyn
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A very good entry into the contest. Your 2-4-2 is straightforward and true. Illustration follows theme. No one can quibble with jealousy and
being green with envy. Marilyn
Comment Written 06-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the nice review, Marilyn.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Patricia,
So you're the kind who likes writing 2-4-2 poems too. This one is really good and the picture you found to go with it works very well too. I'm still answering messages and I sure want to write a poem. LOL
Kat
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Hi Patricia,
So you're the kind who likes writing 2-4-2 poems too. This one is really good and the picture you found to go with it works very well too. I'm still answering messages and I sure want to write a poem. LOL
Kat
Comment Written 06-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the nice review, Kat.
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You're welcome. Kat
Comment from Joan E.
Sometimes these tiny poems are the hardest to write--to be able to capture a thought and make sense. You did well and the color in your artwork and background tied in well with your theme in this 2-4-2. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
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Sometimes these tiny poems are the hardest to write--to be able to capture a thought and make sense. You did well and the color in your artwork and background tied in well with your theme in this 2-4-2. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 06-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the nice review, Joan.
Comment from Sasha
This is a strong 2-4-2 entry and the illustration adds to this too. Excellent work and I wish you all the best in the contest. Did you do the artwork?
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This is a strong 2-4-2 entry and the illustration adds to this too. Excellent work and I wish you all the best in the contest. Did you do the artwork?
Comment Written 06-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the nice review, Sasha. Yes the artwork is mine. It is a rough sketch of a granddaughter.
Comment from Heather Knight
You have written a good poem, Patricia. The format is perfect and I like the presentation very much.
Good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing.
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You have written a good poem, Patricia. The format is perfect and I like the presentation very much.
Good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the nice review, Maria.
Comment from judiverse
You make good use of green in your background and the artwork, as it illustrates "to be green with envy." Your syllable count is right on for the 2-4-2 contest, and best of luck. Envy diminishes a person. People waste time envying others when they could be doing something more productive. judi
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You make good use of green in your background and the artwork, as it illustrates "to be green with envy." Your syllable count is right on for the 2-4-2 contest, and best of luck. Envy diminishes a person. People waste time envying others when they could be doing something more productive. judi
Comment Written 06-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the nice review, Judi.
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You're quite welcome. judi
Comment from heyjude
Patricia, You really highlighted the thoughts here with this picture
and the color. I certainly don't want to envy others. I know I do at
times; especially when their faith is strong and I feel so weak. There
are things that God still has to work on in me.
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Patricia, You really highlighted the thoughts here with this picture
and the color. I certainly don't want to envy others. I know I do at
times; especially when their faith is strong and I feel so weak. There
are things that God still has to work on in me.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the nice review, Judy. It might surprise you be I feel very weak spiritually at times. And other strengthen me.
Comment from Ricky1024
"Envy is one of...
'The Seven Deadly Sins.'
"We Envy all and want all!
The Seven Laws of Judification' explains it all.
(A piece I wrote years ago here)
Ricky by the Bay.
Happy Sabbath Sunday!
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"Envy is one of...
'The Seven Deadly Sins.'
"We Envy all and want all!
The Seven Laws of Judification' explains it all.
(A piece I wrote years ago here)
Ricky by the Bay.
Happy Sabbath Sunday!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the nice review, Ricky.
Comment from misscookie
You captured my attention from the start.
I like the art work you choose for your poem
I thought it was a perfect match
Your words are so true.
Cookie
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You captured my attention from the start.
I like the art work you choose for your poem
I thought it was a perfect match
Your words are so true.
Cookie
Comment Written 06-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the nice review, Cookie.
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You're very welcome, have a nice evening.
Cookie
Comment from winnona
A well written 2-4-2 poem contest entry. Very well written and to the point. the short syllable poems are hard to write sometimes. They make the writer pick and chose their words carefully. I think you did very well completing the challenge of this contest.
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A well written 2-4-2 poem contest entry. Very well written and to the point. the short syllable poems are hard to write sometimes. They make the writer pick and chose their words carefully. I think you did very well completing the challenge of this contest.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the nice review, Winnona.
