Comment from joeruptak

Excellent

I love poetry done in this simple manner
the flow and rhythm were superb making for an enjoyable read
you did a great job of expressing how you felt about moving
I shared the joy of moving that you felt

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2016

Thank you for your time in reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem, and I appreciate the stars.
I also appreciate that you felt the joy - I'm glad to know it shown through.
~patty~

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

What a wonderful story and I am so happy for you! Three days a month ... wow. Best wishes in the contest, my friend. I'm glad you shared your story with us~Debbie

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016

Thank you for your kind words. I also appreciate you reading and reviewing. Putting a poem into a story was tougher than I thought it would be.

Comment from schatzling

Excellent

Short, sweet and to the point is what this poem is.
States all the fact without extra words.
Well done indeed.
Thanks so much for sharing.
I also want to personally thank you for selecting my collage to accompany your poem. It does fit so well with it, I must admit.
Best wishes to you at the voting booth.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016

Thank you for the time in reading and reviewing. I appreciate your kind words and the stars. I also wanted to thank you for the beautiful artwork.
~patty~

Comment from whizpurr ^-^

Excellent

This is a remarkable poem written in such an interesting manner. There's so much good willed sharing in it that it should be easy for anyone to relate to. So happy to hear how positive things are opening up for you. I'm truly happy for you.
Hugs, Aggie

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem, and I appreciate your time in reading it. The stars were great, too.
~patty~

Comment from Yvon

Good

Being biographical can be tough to write. The rhyming and rhythm were good. The wording however I found to be a little bland and did not produce as much excitement as this poem could have brought forth.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016

Thank you for your constructive criticism. I will see what I can do. Also, thank you for reading and reviewing,
~patty~

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes this is well written what a beautiful story you have shared god moves in mysterious ways and you all benefited I enjoyed well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016

Thank you for taking the time to read and review this little poem. The move was a Godsend, and I thank Him every day. I appreciate the stars.
~patty~