Do You?
An important question9 total reviews
Comment from Sis Cat
Yes, this is an important question--one I did not get to ask my father although he answered in many different ways. Your poem is well balanced and delivers a punch line. Thank you for sharing. I wish you success in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
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Yes, this is an important question--one I did not get to ask my father although he answered in many different ways. Your poem is well balanced and delivers a punch line. Thank you for sharing. I wish you success in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
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Thanks so much, Andre. Like me, you seem to think of your Dad a lot. I never asked mine either, but I know he loved me.
Comment from aryr
Wow this was great. So simple and yet so honest. From the mouths of innocent babes. It makes one feel warm and loved. Great picture. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
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Wow this was great. So simple and yet so honest. From the mouths of innocent babes. It makes one feel warm and loved. Great picture. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
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The picture is my little one again. It was taken in England a few years ago.
Thanks for your review.
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You are so welcome Maria and you are definitely blessed with great looking children.
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I just found out that we enjoy someone else's writing- Anne - Mabaker- she suggested I check you out and I let her know that we already read each others work.
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She seems like a very nice lady. I have only read one of her pieces so far, but it was very good.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
MJ,
This is a good poem for the contest. Your picture & words are a great pairing.
You are right. Young kids ask these questions & need reassurance a lot.
Good job & best wishes in the contest. Jan
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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MJ,
This is a good poem for the contest. Your picture & words are a great pairing.
You are right. Young kids ask these questions & need reassurance a lot.
Good job & best wishes in the contest. Jan
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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Thanks so much, Jan.
Comment from jlsavell
M.J. of course it's an important question. You have captured the true essence of life on this very short succinct work. Best wishes with the contest... Jimi
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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M.J. of course it's an important question. You have captured the true essence of life on this very short succinct work. Best wishes with the contest... Jimi
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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Thanks, Jimi. BTW, is this your full name or is it a nickname?
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My real name.
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I had never heard it before. Cute !
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For a woman, I mean.
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Thank you. Hated it growing up. Mainly because I was a skinny, ugly, awkward child and a boy's name made it much worse. I was made fun of constantly.
Lol
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Well, you look very pretty in your profile picture now!
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You are sweet. Do not feel like it at the moment! Still trying to gain my energy and strength after hip replacement surgery Monday! Geting there. Had lofty goals of training for a Marathon in 3 weeks. Lol.. ain't gonna happen. Have been through a lot. Need to rest and gather strength before letting superwoman rule.. lol
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Get better soon!
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. these short syllable poems make the writer pick and choose their words carefully. I thin you completed the challenge of this contest very well.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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A well-written contest entry. these short syllable poems make the writer pick and choose their words carefully. I thin you completed the challenge of this contest very well.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
What more can be said of this absolutely magnificient piece for the 2-4-2 contest.
It says it all in just 8 syllables.
Nicely done
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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What more can be said of this absolutely magnificient piece for the 2-4-2 contest.
It says it all in just 8 syllables.
Nicely done
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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I'm glad you liked it, Barb. It's difficult to write a poem in just 8 syllables.
Comment from DR DIP
I suppose its a question a lot of little kids ask their Dad at one time or another Great accompanying photo you can just see him asking that exact question
I was naughty tonight with one of my posts its called THE SEDUCTION
dip
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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I suppose its a question a lot of little kids ask their Dad at one time or another Great accompanying photo you can just see him asking that exact question
I was naughty tonight with one of my posts its called THE SEDUCTION
dip
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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I'm going to do the shopping now, but I'll read it when I come back or early tomorrow (I work in the evening.)
Thanks for reading.
Comment from robyn corum
I wonder why sometimes kids have to ask that question. *smile* I guess it's the same reason wives have to ask their husbands. For some reason, they're not feeling too confident in the answer, huh? Good entry for the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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I wonder why sometimes kids have to ask that question. *smile* I guess it's the same reason wives have to ask their husbands. For some reason, they're not feeling too confident in the answer, huh? Good entry for the contest!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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Thanks, Robyn.
Comment from Jackarrie
This is a lovely 2-4-2 poem for the contest. the picture is so cute and the question to the Dad is just what a young child would say. I wish you luck in the contest. Mary
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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This is a lovely 2-4-2 poem for the contest. the picture is so cute and the question to the Dad is just what a young child would say. I wish you luck in the contest. Mary
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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Thanks, Mary.
