Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

I am just getting back to writing too are a few years so I am taking things slowly this is well written you have done very well I can tell you are still in love a devoted wife well-done regards Jill

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2016

Thank you for taking the time to read my short poem for my husband. I appreciate your kind words.
~patty~

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Nicely done on the 5.7.5about your husband. his blue eyes and bushy face your heart can't keep pace. Thanks for the share and have a good day.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2016

Thank you for the kind review. I will continue to work with the format.

You too, have a great day
~patty~