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Perennials of War

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Is Anderson a gallant knight? Can he recover Shan

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Comment from Heidi M
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This sounds so interesting. I love historical fiction and look forward to reading this story. I'm wondering where your characters will take us.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2016
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ben Colder
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This has the making of a very interesting story. I have spent time near the Austrian Border. Much in Germany and know many tales. This should be another good one. Bring it on.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2016
    I lived in Germany for 8 years while my husband was stationed there. I hope I can pull it off.
reply by Ben Colder on 31-Oct-2016
    No doubt you can. Go to the Holocaust Museum. I did an essay once, not sure if here or not, but the museum was vital. Best to you.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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I am so excited to get in on the first of one of your books!! Yea, now I can follow it, and get ideas from the master.

I'm going to bookmark this so I can look back on it later.
This was a great idea for starting a book. What an interesting idea!

Take care,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016
    Thank you for the encouragement
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2016
    Thank you for the encouragement
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2016
    Thank you for the encouragement
Comment from Sasha
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This peeked my interest and sounds like a great story. You presented this well and I am already anxious to read your first chapter. I look forward to what seems will be a fascinating story.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016
    Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from c_lucas
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"Picking Up The Pieces," is my suggestion for the title. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. making for a very good read.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016
    Thank you for the encouragement. I have chosen Perennials of War, meaning things that keep coming back. Katie chose it, she had some really good ones.
reply by c_lucas on 01-Nov-2016
    You're welcome, Barbara.
Comment from barkingdog
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Hi, barbara.
I'm totally fascinated with the plot and wanted to start reading the first chapter right now.
Your characters are fascinating. You've really fleshed out the basics. I can't wait to hear them talking, interacting.

-He's thirty-one years [and] old (and) born on July 20, 1986 in Austin, TX.
- Anderson's uncle(.) From Peter,

:) ellen ss

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016
    Thank you for the encouragement. I made the corrections
reply by barkingdog on 30-Oct-2016
    I'm ready to read another of your works. Hurry up! haha
Comment from light
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I like it already. I look forward to reading more. It looks like you have done a lot of research on this subject. It should be very interesting.
Elaine

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016
    Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from royowen
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I sounds like a great framework for a plot Barbara, a comprehensive look into one of those seemingly frequent struggles to regain lost valuables in the pre war period, families fleeing nazi Germany during the time of Hiter's rise to power. Well done, Barbara, sounds exciting, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016
    Thank you for the encouragement.
reply by royowen on 30-Oct-2016
    Most welcome, good luck
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Yes I will surely try to follow you have set out the plot and characters very well I will try my best to keep up looking forward to reading well-done regards Jill

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016
    Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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Excellent! I'll be reading this one, at last I'll be able to start from the beginning. It's the type of story I love to read, so I'm looking forward to
it!! So happy you are writing another story! :) Sandra

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016
    Thank you for the encouragement.