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The Daredevil Girls From Bunker Hil

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A fantasy novel about good fighting evil.

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Comment from jlsavell
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Rhonda, oh my it is hard to believe the witches are so evil they plant a bomb. They seem to be so petulant and compulsive in their hate and their behavior. Another great chapter in the saga of the Daredevils.. jimi

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016
    Thank you, Jimi, yes, those witches are a bit narcissistic, and then some!
    I appreciate your stopping by to review,
    Rhonda
Comment from Sheik S. Peer
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I did not notice any grammatical or tense errors in sentence structure. I found the characters believable and well developed. Summary of the last chapter was helpful in following this one. Good work.

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 Comment Written 30-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016
    Thank you so much for the wonderful review! I appreciate your time,
    Rhonda
Comment from Brett Matthew West
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Interesting storyline.

Good characterization.

Werewolves are my favorite critters, so you had me hooked there.

Well done!

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016
    I'm so glad you like werewolves, Brett. Obviously mine as well. Thanks for the review,
    Rhonda