31 Days, Piece of Cake
Potlatch challenge-Halloween Poem29 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I think Brooke would be pleased mike. This is a great count down to Halloween, and you've written in from the excitement of a child waiting to get out there to TRICK OR TREAT.
Good one,
cheers,
valda
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I think Brooke would be pleased mike. This is a great count down to Halloween, and you've written in from the excitement of a child waiting to get out there to TRICK OR TREAT.
Good one,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 29-Oct-2016
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem counting the days off from the first a to the last thirty one. It was fun to read and educational to.count from 1 to 31.
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A very well-written poem counting the days off from the first a to the last thirty one. It was fun to read and educational to.count from 1 to 31.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2016
Comment from seaglass
This is like the advent calendar for Halloween. LOL. Children love counting poems and this one works. Good rhyme and meter and filled with the spirit of the approaching holiday.
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This is like the advent calendar for Halloween. LOL. Children love counting poems and this one works. Good rhyme and meter and filled with the spirit of the approaching holiday.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2016
Comment from sandy montgomery
Cute take on the challenge. I liked the simplicity of it. Maybe a little repetitive but likeable all the same. Thank you for sharing your work.
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Cute take on the challenge. I liked the simplicity of it. Maybe a little repetitive but likeable all the same. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2016
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
I lovvvvve that picture! I want that costume to wear every day! LOL! Terrific poem, Mikey, and Brooke would love it, I'm sure. I really miss her. :(
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I lovvvvve that picture! I want that costume to wear every day! LOL! Terrific poem, Mikey, and Brooke would love it, I'm sure. I really miss her. :(
Comment Written 29-Oct-2016
Comment from jlsavell
Mr.Cahill,
Yes BROOKE WOULD BE VERY PLEASED. She was pleased with all she reviewed so generously and kind. I love your poetic adventure of Halloween. I will be under a sheet for the most part, so maybe I will just be ghostly.. lol.. well done Mr. Cahill.. keep up the good work.. jimi
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Mr.Cahill,
Yes BROOKE WOULD BE VERY PLEASED. She was pleased with all she reviewed so generously and kind. I love your poetic adventure of Halloween. I will be under a sheet for the most part, so maybe I will just be ghostly.. lol.. well done Mr. Cahill.. keep up the good work.. jimi
Comment Written 29-Oct-2016
Comment from damommy
That's certainly original, counting the days down to Halloween. It was fun to read and count down with "him." Cute photo. Is that you? LOL.
I won't be doing Potlatch this week. Last week, I was sick, and this morning, my mother feel and broke multiple ribs, with one poking her lung. In hospital, where everyone is watching her like a hawk. She'll be 95 Christmas Day.
I just took this break to review. Maybe next week, I can join in again. 8-)
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That's certainly original, counting the days down to Halloween. It was fun to read and count down with "him." Cute photo. Is that you? LOL.
I won't be doing Potlatch this week. Last week, I was sick, and this morning, my mother feel and broke multiple ribs, with one poking her lung. In hospital, where everyone is watching her like a hawk. She'll be 95 Christmas Day.
I just took this break to review. Maybe next week, I can join in again. 8-)
Comment Written 29-Oct-2016
Comment from Gloria ....
Great fun with this one, Mav. I have a hard enough time to count to ten without forgetting what I'm doing, so getting through to thirty one is no mean feat. Plus it made me stay on track making sure you didn't miss a day.
Fun, fun post and a real treat to read. Of course Brooke would love this one!
Ange.
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Great fun with this one, Mav. I have a hard enough time to count to ten without forgetting what I'm doing, so getting through to thirty one is no mean feat. Plus it made me stay on track making sure you didn't miss a day.
Fun, fun post and a real treat to read. Of course Brooke would love this one!
Ange.
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Comment Written 29-Oct-2016
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I see her cringing like she did when she helped me.
You know I had to number each and see if you missed one.lol
Cute but quite different dear friend.
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I see her cringing like she did when she helped me.
You know I had to number each and see if you missed one.lol
Cute but quite different dear friend.
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Comment Written 29-Oct-2016
