Reflections Within my Son
five seven five on love6 total reviews
Comment from visionary1234
Even 'old' parents have that trust, Greg - it never seems to disappear. Something unexplainable within you changes when you see those eyes looking up at you, and it stay that way, even when they're looking DOWN at you and you want to murder them! Congrats on your third place - guaranteed to be a FS crowdpleaser! "Crystalline cyan" - maybe a little over the top ... but hey, lay it on! :):):)
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2016
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Even 'old' parents have that trust, Greg - it never seems to disappear. Something unexplainable within you changes when you see those eyes looking up at you, and it stay that way, even when they're looking DOWN at you and you want to murder them! Congrats on your third place - guaranteed to be a FS crowdpleaser! "Crystalline cyan" - maybe a little over the top ... but hey, lay it on! :):):)
Comment Written 02-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2016
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HAHAHAHAHAHA. You know me too well. I KNEW it was over the top! I just liked the way it sounded. But when I read it I thought the exact same thing. I didn't care enough to change it :) I can't believe you caught that.
Comment from foxangie123
That baby is Absolutley handsome and this is unbeatable in my opinion and is a first place in my book. He is a hunk of love. Fabulous.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016
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That baby is Absolutley handsome and this is unbeatable in my opinion and is a first place in my book. He is a hunk of love. Fabulous.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016
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Oh you're so sweet! Thank you so very much :)
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The truth. Hugs your way.
Comment from l.raven
the most wonderful gift of all...is the gift of a child...with that first look...he/she has won your heart...so very nicely written...and your picture is priceless...xxoo
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016
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the most wonderful gift of all...is the gift of a child...with that first look...he/she has won your heart...so very nicely written...and your picture is priceless...xxoo
Comment Written 30-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016
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Oh thank you so much. It IS the most wonderful gift. Thank you :)
Good to see you again. I've been away for a bit!
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you are so very welcome...and good to have you back...xxoo Linda
Comment from Pam (respa)
-What a beautiful baby. Congratulations on being new parents.
-A very good poem about him.
-Good format and good imagery, esp. in line one.
-Good thoughts, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
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-What a beautiful baby. Congratulations on being new parents.
-A very good poem about him.
-Good format and good imagery, esp. in line one.
-Good thoughts, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
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Thank you so much! It's good seeing your name reviewing my work! It's been a while, have a great night!
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You are very welcome, Greg. I changed my FS name a little, as I thought it was time for a change. Haven't seen you for a while, either, and then you share a poem about this precious boy. Hope you will be on FS more often.
Comment from amada
I just love the poetic description of the baby's eyes. "eyes reflect God's sacred trust..." For sure this is a gem and will do great in the contest. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
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I just love the poetic description of the baby's eyes. "eyes reflect God's sacred trust..." For sure this is a gem and will do great in the contest. Best wishes.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
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Thanks so very much! I'm honored that you liked that line! Really thank you, it means a lot to me
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Thanks so very much! I'm honored that you liked that line! Really thank you, it means a lot to me
Comment from Marykelly
In a few short words you have delivered a very important message, trust. Trust is the essence of the newborn's relationship with parents because newborn human babies are totally helpless and develop trust in their parents. Parents trust God that He will give them loving strength to be good parents. God trusts the parents.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
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In a few short words you have delivered a very important message, trust. Trust is the essence of the newborn's relationship with parents because newborn human babies are totally helpless and develop trust in their parents. Parents trust God that He will give them loving strength to be good parents. God trusts the parents.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
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Thanks so very much! I agree, such a sweet review
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Thanks so very much! I agree, such a sweet review
