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Our Destiny

The world prays.

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Comment from RYME4U
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Short and sad message here. The picture of Miss Liberty crying is a good choice of artwork. I don't think anyone is happy with the choices we have to make, Good luck.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
    Yes, no matter one's sentiments, matters seem only to get worse daily.
    Thanks, RYME4U.
Comment from BeasPeas
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You are 100% correct and the ones most grieving for and praying for our destiny are Americans themselves. This is our last chance for survival. Marilyn

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
    Of course, it remains to be seen whose prayers will be answered, and we may never learn if any were.
    Thanks for your support, Marilyn.
    Don
reply by BeasPeas on 28-Oct-2016
    Whatever happens, we all have to accept it.
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
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The objective correlation of the poem reminisces an all-pervading disposition of despondency in the world and the need for amelioration.The work derives its texture from the use of rhymes and personification.Excellent work!Bravo!

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
    thank you for your complimentary and insightful comments, Lloyd!
reply by Lloyd T. Okoko on 28-Oct-2016
    Remain Blessed!
Comment from barkingdog
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You are so right. We not only pray, but I think on November 8th we'll be holding our breaths.
Our future is in the hands of the voters. I hope they cast them thoughtfully, not as sheep.
Good luck in the contest with your thought provoking entry.
:) e

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
    Amen. We'll soon know the outcome, but governance is going to be contentious and grueling.
    Best wishes.