Comment from pharp

Excellent

Excellent job in the penning of this poem, the message within this poem is very true and the title, it does say it all. Excellent rhyming, meter and a very smooth flow. Wishing you all the best in the contest. Blessings.........Portia

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016

Thank you very much

Comment from angel123

Excellent

Great poem! I think you should promote it! It flows well with the truth and rhymes. I enjoyed reading it and your artwork choice is great!

Angel123

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016

Thanks. I'll just let it float where it is. There is no real deepness to it, just observation.

Comment from paige.harris04

Good

This poem is amazing!! I like the rhyme and flow of the poem. I give it 4 stars because its amazing, but not my favorite. Nothing in particular. This poem was an easy, inspirational read!!

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2016

Thanks!

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a great contest entry you have penned. The funny thing about it is it is so true too! You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2016

Thanks for your kind words.