Comment from angel123

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your well written poem. It is cleverly written with wit and humor. I also like your artwork choice.
Good luck in the contest.

Angel123

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2016

I just imagined a lonely little ghost and his one night 'carte blance' when he can blend and play with the kids. The illustration I thought was perfect, a little giggling ghost in the confusion, cheers, thanks for the review, j

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

A good and timely entry for the content. Striking
presentation and colors with a cute message. Good
for kids of all ages.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016

Thanks for the review. I could just imagine this lonely little ghost finally able to be free that one day a year, gggling and running with the kids, cheers, j

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

Love this sweet little poem you have here. I enjoyed the artwork as well. It is great to read the fun things about Halloween. Excellent poem.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016

Thanks for the review. I couldjust imagine this lonely little ghost finally able to mingle, that one night a year, cheers, j

Comment from winnona

Excellent

A well-written contest entry. your well-chosen artwork and background color completed the piece well. I think you completed the challenge of the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016

Thanks for the insightful review, I can just imagine the lonely little ghost having a blast on his one night out. Cheers, j

Comment from Richard J

Excellent

A sweet and fun Senryu! : )
it really brought an enjoyable smile imagining a little ghost running with the kids on their "Trick, Or Treat" hunt for goodies; or, is that "little ghost" really little Johnny or Jill? LOL!
Great entry, and i love the illustration you picked ... the whole presentation works to a tee.

Thanks a zillion "BOOS!" for the Halloween happiness shared! ~ Richard : )

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2016

Thanks for the review. I could just picture a lonely little ghost and his one night of freedom when he can finally roam free among the kids, cheers, j

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

It must be a holiday for the ghosts and goblins to be able to blend in. A fun senru that stands out during this holloween season.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2016

Thanks for the review, I hope you read the final one. I thought of a little lonely ghost that can roam freely on Halloween, giggling among the kids, cheers, j