Comment from Dawn Munro

Exceptional

"Soni, you're majoring on the minors." -brilliant!

HAHAHAHA! Goliath and Fi!

Well, I'm late (as usual) and a six won't do a thing to promote this, but I'll be damned if I'll rate it any less! It's wonderful, Barbara.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016

I am sorry you had to read this with no money attached. I try to make my readers receive some benefit. Thank you.

reply by Dawn Munro on 29-Oct-2016

I know you do, Barbara. It doesn't matter- it was my pleasure.

Comment from camaria

Excellent

I haven't read previous chapters but you do a good job of conveying Soni as a strong and practical women who doesn't like to let her emotions rule her, and Jim as a tender and considerate man. Well done on finishing your novel, an incredible feat that I have yet to complete!

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Cumbrianlass

Exceptional

Very well done, Barbara. Bravo. This was a fairly complicated plot, and I think you did a great job holding it together and keeping the flow going. Great characters! You should be very proud. I'm proud of you! Yay!

Hugs,

Av

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016

Thank you for the encouraging review.

Comment from CEO2020

Excellent

Wow! The end. Is it really the end? I think you became so enthralled in this story, it will be hard for you to stop. Soni is a great character. I love the way she thinks and handles herself. I saw so many versions of her throughout the chapters I read.

Excellent work! Congratulations!

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

HAHAHAHA! You're ALREADY starting a NEW novel? You are amazing! After this one took so long to complete, it seems like you'd take a -- week? -- off, maybe. But no, you're hot to write the next one. I wanna grow up to be YOU! *smile*

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016

Thank you for the encouragement..

Comment from heisemg

Excellent

New to this site, sorry I missed the rest of the story. What I saw was good, well written. I also have a problem with a story line sometimes, I have an idea where I want to go, but the characters take me someplace else. Actually that is the fun part about writing.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from winnona

Excellent

A very well-written ending chapter. The chapter flowed well from beginning to end. The use of detail and very realistic characters brought the piece to life as I read it.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

I didn't read any earlier chapters, but I know a good ending when I read one. Yours was very happy too. Keep writing, okay? Have a great week!

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

I am sorry that your story has come to an end, I have enjoyed reading your work and hope this becomes a best seller for you. I'm ure that you are glad that it has come to a conclusion.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Bryana

Exceptional

I love the ending, just the way I imagined !!!
Soni and Jim had to end together after all what
the had gone through, he kept her safe and did
it with love.
I'm waiting for the next book dear Barbara.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016

Thank you for the kind review.