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As it Goes

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Comment from mrsmajor
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A thoughtful poem, Teri, which is so true if we really think about it...

Time is a fleeting thing, it come and goes quicker then we can blink an eye...I think this is a meaningful entry for the contest..and I wish you good luck.

Hugs, and Love too,
Victoria

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2016
    Thank you my sweet friend! love, Teri
reply by mrsmajor on 23-Oct-2016

    You're very welcome, Teri, it was my pleasure!

    Love You!
Comment from Dawn Munro
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Time is a fleeting thing is a fabulous start to this little 2-4-2 poem - it surely is fleeting, and many of us appreciate the truth of this more and more, since it seems to pass even more quickly as we age. Good luck!

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2016
    Thank you for the great review! hugs, Teri
reply by Dawn Munro on 22-Oct-2016
    You're very welcome.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2016
    have a great nite. hugs Teri
reply by Dawn Munro on 22-Oct-2016
    You too.
Comment from robyn corum
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Teresa,

This is a great entry for the 2-4-2 poetry contest! I am so proud of you for thinking of it! It's got a great chance of winning the whole thing! HUZZAH! Good luck!

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016
    Thank you my friend! hugs, Teri
Comment from sandy montgomery
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This is so true and especially on my mind. Yesterday I attended the funeral of a 37 year old cousin. It reinforced this truth. We don't know how much time we have on this earth so we better learn to redeem our days well. This was a good thought provoking piece. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016
    Thank you my friend for the great review! So sorry for your loss! Hugs, Teri
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Teri,

Your words are so true. Where has October gone?

Good job on the format of the words for the prompt. The art is perfect.

Best wishes in the contest. Jan

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016
    Thank you so much Jan! hugs, Teri
Comment from Joy Graham
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I love that picture. It made me want to see what you had to say. Short and sweet message, yet profound. I've been using that word, "profound" quite a bit this morning. It seems to be the theme of the day :) Time is definitely here and then gone. Well said. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016
    Thank you so much for the great review and good luck wishes. hugs, Teri
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written 2-4-2 poem. Time is a concept that we struggle to understand. One day can be like an hour or an hour can be like a week. The only time that matter is now.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016
    Thank you so much my friend! That is so true! Our time is now! hugs, Teri
Comment from Max. Velocity
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It never ceases to amaze how the writers on here can take these big notions and squeeze them into little gems.

Fleeting come and gone.....here today gone tomorrow......it seems like only yesterday.

Great image choice too for your minimalist offering to the 2-4-2

Enjoyed.

God Bless you.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016
    Thank you so much for the great review and May God bless you too! Teri
Comment from Heather Knight
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This poem is cute and funny, but what it says is so true! The picture you've chosen is perfect.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016
    Thank you my friend! Hugs, Teri
Comment from c_lucas
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artwor=artwork. Time is man-made. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016
    Charlie I could not get the k on the page. Thanks for the review. Teri