Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Bloody good ending to Book One of these Horror Haiku's. Good melding of the artwork and minimal words from both you and Gypsy to tell this love tale.
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016

Hello, Valda,

I am gypsy, not Dean. Thank you for the review.
Gypsy

reply by Pearl Edwards on 29-Oct-2016

Sorry Gypsy I knew it was you the computer was giving me grief and obviously effected my mind. Sorry about that.
cheers,

reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016

No worries, that happens to me too. ;)

reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016

No worries, that happens to me too. ;)

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hola Gitana, I'm just so behind with everything. This is exquisite, I love it and can't wait for the next chapter to begin. What a beautiful project the two of you are creating. Un abrazo de tu amiga Ulla)))

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2016

Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Gypsy,

This is a great concluding haiku. I have followed the story from the beginning. Now they are back to where it all started. However, the battle for Mirela is over with only one now remaining as her lover. Great job on the format of the haiku. I love the reference to the 'cold Carpathian mountains.'

Good job on the style of the haiku. Each one seemed to have gotten better [if that was possible[.

Thanks for sharing. Best wishes on your publishing endeavors. Jan

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2016

Thank you, Jan, Dean and I appreciate your feedback and readership following the story of Mirela and Claudiu. I also appreciate your review and kind words sweetie pie.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Aussie

Excellent

You, my friend are a mistress of the Haiku message. I wish I had a six for you, I don't. Ridiculous system! I understand the message in this haiku. It may be fanstory or my computer or...yours. All the poem etc. is sitting on the right hand side of the page?? Have a peek at your writing? Well done hon.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016

Hello sweetie pie,

The haiku looks fine on my end. It must be your computer, that's weird. I'm sorry about that.

I always appreciate your review and kind words. Thank you for your feedback. I hope all is well and you are happy.

Gypsy hugs

reply by Aussie on 21-Oct-2016

I think it was fanstory, all my other poem reviews were fine. I do use Classic Fanstory. Have a good day my friend! XX

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I liked your culmination of the love triangle in this haiku. Your alliteration of "c's" and the sensuous artwork added to the intensity. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016

Thank you, Joan :)

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

I am finally all caught up and am exhausted but delightfully so. This is a superb ending to Book One and I anxiously await the beginning of Book Two. I am so glad I want back and read all the previous chapters. I love this story and cannot wait for the continuation.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016

Hello, Sasha :) You are the ONLY one who has gone back to read every single chapter. Well done! I'm proud of you. Dean and I will do our best to keep your interest. :)

Comment from RoostyNester

Excellent

Now the battle is over and Cladiu has won the vixen Mirela. A very nice Horror Haiku poem. The art work enhances the romantic adventure. Well done. I loved it.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016

Thank you, Nester, :) Dean and I appreciate your readership.

Comment from F. Wehr3

Excellent

Very nicely done. I enjoyed the explanations of the story. They say a picture is worth a thousand words. The only word that comes to mind is Grrrrr...

Take care,
Russell

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016

Thank you, Russell,

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

Hi Gypsy
I love the presentation of this haiku, the image is really a beautiful one. I must show my ignorance of the dark meaning of it. Carpathian mountain range is known as the lonely planet and it has a holiday resort.

Mary

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016

It's okay. I should writ it in the author notes. It's a mountain range in Romania.

Thank you very much for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
Gypsy hugs

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

Potent brevity. Well voiced and fine flow and style. Superb alliterated satori. Fine consonance of L as well.

Striking and artistic presentation.

No nits.

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016

Thank you very much for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
Gypsy hugs

reply by rama devi on 20-Oct-2016

Hugs, dear! :-))