Comment from CEO2020

Exceptional

Four stars for spirituality, Five stars for bringing the words to life. Six stars for making the words continue after reading. Good Luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2016

Wow, I like how you broke the stars down and thank you for this outstanding review, six star rating and best wishes..........Blessings..........................

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

The rondeau is a fine form for a spiritual poem of this kind. The half-line refrain accentuates the visionary aspect and the marginal differences in nuance are effective too. Not always easy to work with only two rhymes without the poem becoming forced, but you have managed it well.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2016

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings........................

Comment from nancyjam

Excellent

A beautiful expression of faith fills this
well crafted Rondeau.
The repeat line is perfect and the rhymes
are pleasant and well placed.
Strong meter for smooth even flow.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2016

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes. Blessings..............................

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

I loved this highly inspirational poem. In this world as it exists today we need more of this kind of inspiration, and your rondeau is lovely. I especially liked, "...all my problems seem to cease..." When placed at His feet, they do. :)) Good luck in the contests.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2016

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes. Blessings....................

reply by Dawn Munro on 18-Oct-2016

It was my pleasure. :)

Comment from Sis Cat

Excellent

This is a fine poem of faith which felt like a prayer or hymn. Your rondeau is well rhymed and deeply felt. It is filled with hope, strength, and relief from relying on God. Thank you for sharing. I wish you success in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2016

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes. Blessings...................

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

This is going to be a very difficult contest to judge.
I loved the image which added a vision to your poem of faith.
The form was nicely executed.
Wishing you the best of luck in the competition.
My best wishes,
RGstar

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2016

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes. Blessings........................

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Rondeau. That is one thing that God really wants us to do, that is to see what He wants from us. That is to understand that He only needs us to believe in His Word.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2016

Sandra,

Thanks so much for your kind review. Blessing..

Comment from honeytree

Excellent

The art work is very special
for these words written.
When we want strength
and love within our lives
we can ask for help from God.

Honey tree

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2016

Honeytree,

Thanks so much for your review and very wise comments. Blessings........

Comment from RoostyNester

Excellent

A very nice Rondeau poem about the Love and Peace of God. Your poem shows true insight to the attributes of our Great Savior. Your style and verses are well done.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2016

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings............................

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

This is a well written rondeau. The structure and rhythm are done correctly and you have presented it in an attractive way. Great job!

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2016

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments...........................