Spring to Life
Seasonal haiku2 total reviews
Comment from Cumbrianlass
Aww, well this is just cute! Love the rhymes, the cheeky spell-like flavour of your poem. Nice alliteration in the first line. Presentation is perfect as well! Charming! Hope you do well with this one.
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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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Aww, well this is just cute! Love the rhymes, the cheeky spell-like flavour of your poem. Nice alliteration in the first line. Presentation is perfect as well! Charming! Hope you do well with this one.
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Comment Written 16-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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Cumbrianlass, that's just about as good as a review can get! Thank you so much!
Comment from winnona
This is an adorable contest entry/ your artwork and background color finished it well. The only thing I would suggest is to darken the color of your lettering. The words are adorable and flow together well but they are very hard to read!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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This is an adorable contest entry/ your artwork and background color finished it well. The only thing I would suggest is to darken the color of your lettering. The words are adorable and flow together well but they are very hard to read!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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Thank you, WInnona, you convinced me! I could't decided if it was too light or my my need for a new eyeglasses RX was making it look that way. anyhow, I changed thanks to you.
Thanks to you!!
