haiku (hot apple cider)
5-7-5 contest42 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
Very good 5-7-5, in perfect 5-7-5 syllable count and form.
It's quite descriptive, too, as I could nearly smell the scent of hot apple cider wafting in the cool, Autumn air.
Fall being my favorite time of year, I enjoyed reading this very much.
Well done, and best of luck to you in the contest.
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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2016
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Very good 5-7-5, in perfect 5-7-5 syllable count and form.
It's quite descriptive, too, as I could nearly smell the scent of hot apple cider wafting in the cool, Autumn air.
Fall being my favorite time of year, I enjoyed reading this very much.
Well done, and best of luck to you in the contest.
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Comment Written 13-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2016
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Thank you, Dean, for this wonderful review, and I'm pleased you could feel the emotions of autumn in the poem. I also appreciate your creative good luck wish in the contest. Thanks!
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You're more than welcome.
Comment from dmt1967
This conjures up a picture of a log fire, nightgown and slippers, good book and snuggles. Hot cider in the hand... well for me hot coffee. Great poem and thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2016
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This conjures up a picture of a log fire, nightgown and slippers, good book and snuggles. Hot cider in the hand... well for me hot coffee. Great poem and thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 13-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2016
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Thank you, dmt, for this wonderful review, and I'm pleased you could feel the emotions of autumn in the poem. I appreciate your good luck wish in the contest, and I love your mental picture of a warm autumn evening. Thanks!
