Comment from Liberty Justice

Exceptional

SIX STARS to you on Monday, October 17, 2016. So beautiful and touching in moonlight way trees sway and dance. Your design of a tree is so enchanting and intriguing. I just love it. Congrats! Good luck in contest I just viewed. liberty justice

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2016

I am honored by your insightful review and high rating! Thank you!

reply by Liberty Justice on 17-Oct-2016

AFTER contest, tell me who you are. Thanks!

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

How very beautiful a poem and entry to the competition. I love the artist you chose as well. This is geat with the ocean scene and the freeness found in a dance indeed.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016

Thank you so much!

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Wow. This has passion. The poem flowed wonderfully. Excellent word choices. I'm not sure if there was a rhyme scheme but it doesn't matter as each word fit perfectly. Great job.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2016

Thanks! It's a actually a diatelle with a very complicated rhyme scheme: abbcbccaccbcbba and a syllable count of 1-2-3-4-6-8-10-12-10-8-6-4-3-2-1. Never tried composing one before. So, it was a real challenge for this contest. But I loved the artwork and tried to work it as my theme. Regardless of the contest, I had fun and appreciated your taking the time to read and review it.

Comment from Amber Fatone

Excellent

Wow, my hat off to you. This was great on so many levels, first of all, it was romantic but not cheesy. The structure suits the scenery perfectly, and the atmosphere is soft. Great stuff

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2016

Thanks for the positive feedback and for letting me know it wasn't cheesy! Never wrote a diatelle before. Was inspired by the artwork. Thanks again!