Blind Love
Blind man tells his grandson story21 total reviews
Comment from frierajac
I get bored with Nazis now. And I wonder about going blind? Perhaps some colaborative detail about the characters to fill in? what happened is that
a blind man was being led. Maybe a connection to scripture would be appropriate?
I do like the basis for a brief slice of life.
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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2016
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I get bored with Nazis now. And I wonder about going blind? Perhaps some colaborative detail about the characters to fill in? what happened is that
a blind man was being led. Maybe a connection to scripture would be appropriate?
I do like the basis for a brief slice of life.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2016
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. Gretchen
