Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Good job with this "observation" from beyond the grave. They
probably do look in on their own funerals being newly dead and
all. I'm sure our eyes are opened up to a lot of things when we
cross over. I see you placed in this contest, too. Congratulations.
Marilyn

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2016

Thanks for the compliments, Marilyn! It, like most of my stuff, was fun to write.
Don

Comment from Susanne M. Psyris

Excellent

lol....great entry into the Funeral contest. Very funny lines and I really had a great laugh at most. Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2016

Thank you for your excellent review and good wishes, Susanne! I'm very pleased my poem made you laugh.

Comment from pharp

Excellent

Excellent job in the penning of this poem. I like the humor which really brought a smile to my face. Excellent rhyming and a most enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing and the very best to you in the contest. Blessings........Portia

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2016

Thank you for your excellent review and good wishes, Portia! I'm glad my poem made you smile.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Very creative. I love the natural rhyme - perfect word choices. The dark theme of your poem that doesn't match the upbeat tone which I greatly enjoy. Very fun and creative.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2016

Thank you very much, Michael, for your complimentary and insightful comments!

Comment from winnona

Excellent

A well-written contest entry. I think you completed the challenge of the contest well. Your artwork and background color completes the piece.Your words flowed together easily and combined forming the message of the poem for the reader.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2016

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem, Winnona. Much appreciated!