Lightness overcomes Darkness
choose wisely3 total reviews
Comment from winnona
A very nicely written contest entry. I think you completed the challenge of the contest well. Your well-chosen words flowed easily together line to line and combining sent the message of your poem to the reader.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2016
A very nicely written contest entry. I think you completed the challenge of the contest well. Your well-chosen words flowed easily together line to line and combining sent the message of your poem to the reader.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2016
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Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings.......................
Comment from William Ross
I like this and the thought put into this but do not consider it an antonym lightness and pure love or darkness brings hate. good luck and have a good day.
I see what you are saying, I see how it worked
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2016
I like this and the thought put into this but do not consider it an antonym lightness and pure love or darkness brings hate. good luck and have a good day.
I see what you are saying, I see how it worked
Comment Written 04-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2016
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William
Thanks for your review, I may have misunderstood the requirements but they are as follow;
-Choose two words or ideas that are opposite in meaning and write one cinquain for first word/idea and one cinquain for the opposite word/idea.
So, I chose Lightness for the first cinquain and Darkness the opposite word for the second one. If I am wrong in my understanding of how this is to be done, please clarify for me. Your kindness and helpfulness will be greatly appreciated. Blessings.................................
Comment from l.raven
very nicely written...and so very true...God is light...and darkness doesn't have a chance...I love your poem...and a stunning picture...xxoo Love Linda
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2016
very nicely written...and so very true...God is light...and darkness doesn't have a chance...I love your poem...and a stunning picture...xxoo Love Linda
Comment Written 03-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2016
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Thanks so much my friend for your review and kind comments. Blessings...........................
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you are so very welcome...and blessings to you as well...xxoo Love