Comment from NikolaiNoah

Excellent

very well written, clean imagery and has a nice flow. better work than I could do. It made me think beyond the lines of the poem, which is a task every poet should achieve. nice.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2016

Thanks for your generous review. I can't say I wrote it; the words just came forth in line with my feelings as if I was just holding the pen and someone else was sending the words.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I thought this was a unique look at time. Very creative and well written. Easy she came and easily gone - wow that was especially unique. Great job. This is powerful.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2016

I appreciate your comments and feel my efforts were worthwhile in expressing what I felt at the time I wrote this poem.