Comment from Sasha

Excellent

I continue to be impressed with this ongoing story. This is superbly constructed and I just love the artwork which is perfect for this poem. I enjoyed this one immensely and wish I had a 6 left to give you for this one.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016

No worries, Sasha, six stars are nice but your enthusiastic and genuine reviews are worth much much more than that. Keep on reading little smurpherette. Dean and I will continue writing. :)

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Lovely horror haiku for this continuing story as lustreless Luna glides through the lunar eclipse - love the way you've used the two variants of luna/lunar. Well done,
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2016

Thank you, Valda, you are very kind and I am grateful for your review. Have a lovely evening.
gypsy

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hola Gitana, Wow this is a fantastic hora haiku. Your Presentation is out of this world, and took me totally by surprise. The almonds are keeping me busy but I'm glad I didn't miss this, although I'm late. Wish I had ten stars to give you. Besitos de tu amiga Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2016

Hola, guapa,

A mi me encantan las almendras.

Thank you for taking the time to read my haiku and our book. You are very sweet, amiga mia,

gypsy hugs

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Well done with this marvellous haiku Gypsy, you've done well with this well constructed work, just love the artwork, which fits rather well with the poem, you should have a fair collection by now, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2016

My dear friend, Roy, I love your reviews. They are always so positive and helpful. I appreciate your time and kindness. Thank you very much. Blessings

gypsy hugs

reply by royowen on 04-Oct-2016

Most welcome Gypsy

Comment from RoostyNester

Excellent

Nice play on words, Luna eclipse, she glides through, without leave much of a mark. Very well done in style and verse. I liked the picture chosen for your poem. It enhances your message.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2016

I love your review. It's so positive and helpful. I appreciate your time and kindness. Thank you very much. Blessings

gypsy hugs

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This is a lovely entry and well timed since we just recently experienced a lunar eclipse. I like the reference to "Luna" as she is not often referenced. Haniel is another great personification of the moon and its cycles (Archangel of the moon, peace, and tranquility). Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2016

Thank you, Monica, I didn't know about the Archangel of the moon. I love angels. I have a book and a deck of cards for guidance.

It's not an entry for a contest. It's a chapter in a book that Dean and I are writing. :)

I love your review. It's so positive and helpful. I appreciate your time and kindness. Thank you very much. Blessings

gypsy hugs

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Good morning Gypsy;
-we powerfully impact of a poem which you have created imaginatively which is your incorporated inventiveness and ingenious creativeness in their produced a poem of an eeriness event of a lunar eclipse.
-The picture you've chosen and done by, Giorgina is a perfect choice for bringing your conceptual theme to the forefront in establishing a base for your poem.
-Your first two lines are not only grammatically connected but also have a distinct imagery of the action of the moon's light rays slicing through the tree's shadows while the moon is having an eclipse.
-Good use of alliteration of words starting with the L.
-Thanks for sharing and take care and have a good one Gypsy.
Alex

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2016

I love your review. It's so positive and helpful. I appreciate your time and kindness. Thank you very much. Blessings

gypsy hugs

reply by krys123 on 06-Oct-2016

You are so welcome, Gypsy. And may you have a wonderful day.
Alex

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

You selected the perfect picture to match the mood and theme. Your alliteration of "l's" added to the intensity of your haiku. Thanks again for your notes that add to our appreciation of your work. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2016

Thank you, Joan, You are very kind and I am grateful that you took the time to read and review my haiku.

peace be with you,

gypsy

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Gypsy,
I enjoyed your horror haiku for your collaborative book.

The art/image is awesome. I like how you personified the moon & described the eclipse of the moon--an event that often scared the early people who did not understand the astronomical reasons for such. The way you have used it here adds that mystical effect that surrounds legends, vampires, & other such 'dark' events.

Good job with the syllable count, too.

Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2016

Thank you sweetie pie, two in a row! Wow.

gypsy hugs

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

A very strange lunar eclipse!!! Wonderful haiku! Also enjoyed your notes, I didn't know wolves were considered to be gods of light, awesome! Blessings....

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2016

You are very kind and I am grateful that you took the time to read and review my haiku.

peace be with you,

gypsy