Missy Moloney is Mad
Missy is misunderstood.17 total reviews
Comment from RoostyNester
A very true emotional poem. The Missy that believes that everyone else is wrong, when she is the one that is wrong. Passing the blame is her method of solving her problems. I liked your poem, and I agree with the humorous message.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2016
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A very true emotional poem. The Missy that believes that everyone else is wrong, when she is the one that is wrong. Passing the blame is her method of solving her problems. I liked your poem, and I agree with the humorous message.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2016
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Thank you for seeing the real Missy.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A very good poem about the girl who refuses to conform. My sister was like this. During class, for no reason, she would get up and walk to the window and stare at what was going on outside. She became a very well respected painter.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2016
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A very good poem about the girl who refuses to conform. My sister was like this. During class, for no reason, she would get up and walk to the window and stare at what was going on outside. She became a very well respected painter.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2016
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I think everyone knows a Missy Moloney. Thank you for your comments.
Comment from Pantygynt
She sounds quite a handful in this entertaining poem. I must admit to being unable to see how this fits in with the given prompt, "Emotions". I would not have thought madness, that is insanity was an emotion. "Mad" in the sense of anger certainly is an emotion, but Missy M seems more mischievous than angry. Her teachers may be driven to anger but the poem does not actually say that. Maybe i don't get it because I too was a teacher. Lol.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2016
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She sounds quite a handful in this entertaining poem. I must admit to being unable to see how this fits in with the given prompt, "Emotions". I would not have thought madness, that is insanity was an emotion. "Mad" in the sense of anger certainly is an emotion, but Missy M seems more mischievous than angry. Her teachers may be driven to anger but the poem does not actually say that. Maybe i don't get it because I too was a teacher. Lol.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2016
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The emotion is anger. She leaves school mad. Thank you for your observations. You always have helpful comments.
Comment from crybry67
I really like this a lot. I have a Missy Moloney of my own, her name is Emily.(she's my granddaughter) I love the rhythm on this, great rhyme as well.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2016
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I really like this a lot. I have a Missy Moloney of my own, her name is Emily.(she's my granddaughter) I love the rhythm on this, great rhyme as well.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2016
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Several reviewers have talked about the Missy Moloneys in their lives. Thank you for the upbeat words.
Comment from RYME4U
This is well done, I like the cute story line. The rhyming is good and the rhyme-scheme is a perfect match for the meaning of the poem. Very nicely done!
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2016
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This is well done, I like the cute story line. The rhyming is good and the rhyme-scheme is a perfect match for the meaning of the poem. Very nicely done!
Comment Written 29-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2016
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Thank you, I appreciate your positive observations.
Comment from winnona
A well- written contest entry. Your words flow easily line to line combining and forming the message of the poem for the reader. I think you completed the challenge of the contest well.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2016
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A well- written contest entry. Your words flow easily line to line combining and forming the message of the poem for the reader. I think you completed the challenge of the contest well.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2016
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Thank you for your very positive comments.
Comment from EricBrady
Missy Maloney is mad and driving everyone else mad at the same time. Excellent poem for the emotions contest. I think all might know this Missy Maloney. But, she's just misunderstood. This is quite funny and I loved the rhyming tercets. This should be a contender for the contest. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2016
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Missy Maloney is mad and driving everyone else mad at the same time. Excellent poem for the emotions contest. I think all might know this Missy Maloney. But, she's just misunderstood. This is quite funny and I loved the rhyming tercets. This should be a contender for the contest. Best wishes.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2016
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Thank you for such a positive and encouraging review.
Comment from braden.savage2000
To me, this seemed to have the quality of nearly a nursery rhyme, and while some of the scheme was a bit off, I still enjoyed it. There's something in a contumacious personage we can all relate to, and which always seems to be amusing. ;) Keep it up,
Braden
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2016
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To me, this seemed to have the quality of nearly a nursery rhyme, and while some of the scheme was a bit off, I still enjoyed it. There's something in a contumacious personage we can all relate to, and which always seems to be amusing. ;) Keep it up,
Braden
Comment Written 29-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2016
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Thank you for the good observations.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fun poem. Missy Moloney seems to be a busy girl who likes to make everyone grazy. She cannot understand why everyone else make her so mad
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2016
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A very well-written fun poem. Missy Moloney seems to be a busy girl who likes to make everyone grazy. She cannot understand why everyone else make her so mad
Comment Written 29-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2016
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Thank you for your good observations and comments.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly. Poor little Miss had a bad day it seems, maybe it is just hard for her to sit still all day as the lovely rhyme and meter so vividly portray. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2016
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly. Poor little Miss had a bad day it seems, maybe it is just hard for her to sit still all day as the lovely rhyme and meter so vividly portray. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2016
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Thank you for such positive remarks.
