Whirling White
Fantasy watching the waves on Lake Michigan2 total reviews
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
Very lovely wording in this great piece of poetry. I only wonder what was meant in this line:
She saut�©s and pirouettes
Great luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2016
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Very lovely wording in this great piece of poetry. I only wonder what was meant in this line:
She saut�©s and pirouettes
Great luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment Written 27-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2016
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Ballet: Saute'
a jump off both feet, landing in the same position.I will try to correct. Thanks
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welcome very much!
Comment from RYME4U
Excellent. The beauty of dancing waves comes through well and the comparison to a nymph is a great metaphor. Very well written . Great job!
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2016
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Excellent. The beauty of dancing waves comes through well and the comparison to a nymph is a great metaphor. Very well written . Great job!
Comment Written 27-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2016
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Thank you for the read.
