Hora haiku (Horror haiku)
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "haiku (wicked east wind bestows)"A co-authored book of dark haiku poetry
26 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
I'm enjoyed the gothic haiku horrors that you and Dean are creating. This is quite and undertaking by the two of you. Well done. I look forward to seeing is coming next.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2016
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I'm enjoyed the gothic haiku horrors that you and Dean are creating. This is quite and undertaking by the two of you. Well done. I look forward to seeing is coming next.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 26-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2016
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Thank you, Janet, you are very kind. Dean and I appreciate you reading our story.
gypsy
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written horror haiku, Mirela must have some of her mother's wickedness in her genes, we all have some characteristics of one or both of our parents.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2016
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A very well-written horror haiku, Mirela must have some of her mother's wickedness in her genes, we all have some characteristics of one or both of our parents.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2016
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Very good! Not too many are catching on to that or they are not reading the author notes. Thank you for reading, Sandra. :) Dean and I appreciate you following our story.
gypsy
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
You deliver a well penned verse with spot on syllable count and hauntingly eerie imagery. The reference to the wicked witch of the east was not lost on me and was nicely executed in its subtlety. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2016
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You deliver a well penned verse with spot on syllable count and hauntingly eerie imagery. The reference to the wicked witch of the east was not lost on me and was nicely executed in its subtlety. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2016
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Hello, Monica, I am so grateful and pleased to see you and your review. Thank you for taking the time to read it. :)
gypsy hugs
Comment from judiverse
Great sound with veiled and evil. I take it the narrator feels a kinship with the evil wind. As the last line states, they are kindred spirits. Sometimes it seems as if the wind is evil, the damage it can do. Instead of the devil made me do it, it's all the east wind's fault! Very convincing. Great presentation. judi
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2016
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Great sound with veiled and evil. I take it the narrator feels a kinship with the evil wind. As the last line states, they are kindred spirits. Sometimes it seems as if the wind is evil, the damage it can do. Instead of the devil made me do it, it's all the east wind's fault! Very convincing. Great presentation. judi
Comment Written 26-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2016
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LOL Judi, that is funny, the east wind made me do it. LoL
Mirela lost her memory but is, slowly, coming back. Her mother was an evil witch and Mirela may share her mother's evil ways .... we don't know for sure --yet!
Thank you for reading, sweetie pie.
gypsy hugs
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You're welcome. Good luck with your book. judi
Comment from Dean Kuch
Poor Mirela. The dainty thing catches a brief break, then she's right back in the thick of things one again.
That would be enough to drive someone to madness!
I know...
I like the fact that you always seem to shy away from the traditional "norm" that so many seem to want to impose upon us who write haiku poetry. You know, the "5-7-5" mentality that's so prevalent here?
While your haiku does have a syllabic count of 6/7/4, it is still well within the limits of seventeen syllables, or less, required of haiku. It demonstrates great balance (shot/long/short), a truly terrifying Gothic theme, and as always, the artwork which accompanies this is superb.
Well done, my talented Gypsy.
How in the hell could I possibly follow this!?!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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Poor Mirela. The dainty thing catches a brief break, then she's right back in the thick of things one again.
That would be enough to drive someone to madness!
I know...
I like the fact that you always seem to shy away from the traditional "norm" that so many seem to want to impose upon us who write haiku poetry. You know, the "5-7-5" mentality that's so prevalent here?
While your haiku does have a syllabic count of 6/7/4, it is still well within the limits of seventeen syllables, or less, required of haiku. It demonstrates great balance (shot/long/short), a truly terrifying Gothic theme, and as always, the artwork which accompanies this is superb.
Well done, my talented Gypsy.
How in the hell could I possibly follow this!?!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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Well, Dean Darlin' how to follow me? you get behind me and .... never mind LoL
Thank you, co-author, I try my best. I am sure you will do it justice.
Gypsy
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Oh, following you would be a pleasure, lol.
Following this poem is going to be difficult.
You're more than welcome, fear Gypsy.
~Dean
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Her thoughts and dreams visit her as she slumbers, bringing ideas and deep feelings and thoughts of another time, place.
Nicely done as another part to the differently done book
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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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Her thoughts and dreams visit her as she slumbers, bringing ideas and deep feelings and thoughts of another time, place.
Nicely done as another part to the differently done book
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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Thank you, Barb! I appreciate you following our horror haiku story. Dean and I appreciate it.
gypsy hugs
