Comment from heyjude

Excellent

Sandra, I'm very glad it ended up being apple pie they were paying for.
You really had me going. I thought what is Sandra writing about this
time. You did a good job with this picture challenge. I liked the fun
ending.

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 Comment Written 26-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016

LOL! It is a bit different to the normal type I write, lol, I wonder how many thought it was going to be something else!! Thank you, Judy, for this fun review. So glad you liked it. :) Sandra xxx

Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

You did have fun with this one. Didn't you?

You took the reader from the possibility of a lascivious encounter with a mysterious lady in gold to the delicious encounter with homemade apple pie. haha

:) ellen


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 Comment Written 26-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016

I don't know how that happened, but I did have a giggle when I put that line in. lol! Thanks Ellen. :) Sandra xx

reply by barkingdog on 26-Sep-2016

Loved the unexpected twist!