Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

This picture challenge was different and handled in so many different ways. YOurs made me smile with the pie as the prize.
Very nicely done with the flow being a sing/song tone.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016

Thanks, Barb. I had a bit of fun writing this one. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. :) Sandra xxxx

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

This was a fun one. You caught me by surprise with the ending LOL. The meter in this seems flawless to me - well done, my friend. Fun read

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016

Thank you, Douglas. I can't understand what people expected, LOL, I thought it was obvious what they were after! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks again my friend. :) Sandra.

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

LOL! So funny! You read my mind! I just had to read your new post before I left the computer to make an apple pie.. TRUE! This is creepy. I wonder if it will attract men to my door. LOL! :)

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016

If you open your door and let the smell of the pie cooking waft out, I'm sure they will be queuing up for miles! LOL. Make sure they pay for it! Thanks, Phyllis, have you made it yet? ~That really was spooky! :) Sandra xxx

reply by Phyllis Stewart on 26-Sep-2016

I just took it out of the oven. Mark's sister is visiting from Michigan and brought a bag of yummy apples, so I made us a pie. Come have a slice. :)

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016

I be over straight away, but it's now my bedtime!! Enjoy your pie. xxx

reply by Phyllis Stewart on 26-Sep-2016

See you in the morning then. Goodnight. :)

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I have no more stars to give.
This was a good one in deed
You really surprise me
Thank you for a good chuckle it made my day.
Cookie

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016

Thank you, Miss Cookie, I had such fun writing this, and I've had some really funny reviews. I'm really pleased you enjoyed it. :) Sandra xxx

reply by misscookie on 27-Sep-2016

You're very welcome. have a blessed day.
Cookie

Comment from Treischel

Excellent

You imp! You had us thinking one thing, and popped the surprise. I enjoyed your clever bit for the "picture this" potlatch assignment. Well written, and such a tease.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016

LOL!! I thought it was so plain what all the men wanted! A nice piece of home made pie is irresistible! Thank you, Tom, for this fun review. I'm pleased you enjoyed my but of fun. :) Sandra xx

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Oh, yes, there is nothing more alluring than the smell of hot apple pie with a dollop or two of ice cream, and drizzled with warm caramel. I must admit I would turn down just about anything for it. Great job. :-)

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016

Oh don't, Ric! After writing this, I really fancied a nice hot slice of apple pie, and first thing in the morning I'll be making one and having it with ice cream and warm caramel now!! Thanks my friend, I'm glad you liked it. :) Sandra xx

Comment from Leineco

Excellent

LOL - what a wonderful sudden turn at the end Sandra!

Ahh. . .the variety of temptations that lure us ;-)

Deceptively written - and cleverly turned on its head. Good one!

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016

I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I had such a giggle writing it and reading the reviews, well, tut tut!! Some people got it so wrong!! LOL. Thanks so much, my friend. :) Sandra xx

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

I have come to the conclusion that men (and ladies, too) will
do just about anything for a good piece of pie. I, for one, will
seek out places that are known for baking a good pie. So
entertaining, all in good fun, with great rhyming. Marilyn

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016

Thank you, Marilyn, I had a lot of fun writing this one. I know everyone would pay good money for a nice slice of home made apple pie! :) Sandra xx

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Sandra

= LOL!! Oh, you are the cheeky one.
= This is hilarious, the way you lead the reader on--all for apple pie.
= Well, I hope the apples were Granny Smith, for crying out loud!! (*<*)
= Fun ride, my friend. Great interpretation.

<> A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*>*)
<> Cheers & Blessings <> Jax
<> Published as <> Jacqueline M Franklin

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016

Let me tell you, Jackie, the apple pie was lovely! LOL, I couldn't get over how all the reviewers thought I was referring to something else! LOL! Thanks my friend, I'm really looking forward to reading yours. :) Sandra xxx

Comment from aryr

Excellent

Oh my that was a great twist and ironically it does suit the picture rather well. It would be great to be incised in that manner and then receive a truly great treasure of pleasure. Great job Sandra, thanks.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016

Thank you, my friend. I did have a laugh writing this one. I'm glad you liked it. :) Sandra xx