Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Johngie, this is just beautiful sweet girl...I can hardly wait for Autumn and all its beautiful colors...so very nicely written...and I love your picture...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2016

Thank you. Autumn is my favorite season.

reply by l.raven on 25-Sep-2016

I can see why...you are so very welcome...xxoo Love

Comment from frogbook

Excellent

This is an excellent entry with it's beautiful presentation and perfectly chosen words taking us from morning till night. I wish I would have realized we did not have to use the picture offered.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2016

Thank you. I read the instructions a few times til I caught that I could use another picture.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, my friend, You must know that I love haiku and other short poetry so whenever I see a contest I always vote.

Let's see ...
presentation= awesome colors!
syllable count= 5/7/5 good job! This is an important part in this contest.
senses= sight
suggestion= none, you did a super job. :)

good job and good luck, sweetie pie.

gypsy

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2016

Thank you for your kind words. 😊

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very beautiful 5-7-5 poem you have penned about Autumn! I love the descriptive wording you used that brought Autumn to life again and the art work was great too! hugs, Teri

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2016

Thank you

Comment from prettybluebirds

Exceptional

Exceptional. Good work, Angie. I spent the whole day working on a story for my writing class. Boy, they keep getting tougher, but I guess that's how one learns to write. I have learned a lot already. Nice to see you on here again, keep writing. Des is doing great right now. I hope he hangs in there until I can sign him in a medicare advantage plan in October. Love ya, Auntie.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2016

Thank you Auntie

Glad to hear your sticking with your class. I really should take one. It's been way too long. October is just a week away can you believe it. Glad to hear Des is doing well.

Love you both

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

Terrific. In Florida we don't have seasonal changes. The only difference between summer and winter is, we don't have to mow the awn as often.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2016

Thank you Thomas

Comment from Bollie

Excellent

This is a perfect poem for this particular contest. The imagery in every line is really beautiful. The picture that you chose to accompany this poem is also perfect. These two things combined make for a lovely presentation. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2016

Thank you