Steaming
It's the little things that keep love alive.4 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
this just has the most wonderful feel to it...I live in Illinois and I know that feeling...but ours was hot chocolate...LOL...so very nicely written...and a beautiful picture...miss our fireplace...Love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2016
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this just has the most wonderful feel to it...I live in Illinois and I know that feeling...but ours was hot chocolate...LOL...so very nicely written...and a beautiful picture...miss our fireplace...Love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 23-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2016
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Thank you so much ! Not many can get the same feel for the poem. Glad you did!
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you are so very welcome...my husband passed and I had a fireplace in our home...sigh...xxoo Linda
Comment from frogbook
Quite a warm and compelling thought here filled with seasonal and romantic references. Great starting word choice well expanded upon by the poem. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2016
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Quite a warm and compelling thought here filled with seasonal and romantic references. Great starting word choice well expanded upon by the poem. Best of luck.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2016
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Many thanks for the positive feedback. Enjoyed these warm thoughts and images, trying to psych myself up for the upcoming winter months here in New England. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from RodG
This rictameter is charming and extremely expressive. One of the best I've ever read on this site.
â?¢ wonderful choice of two-syllable refrain that has a double meaning as we read through the poem.
â?¢ the way your camera glides! We see first the cider being poured, then get a flashback to why it's welcome, and finally the close-up of the couple lying near the fire enjoying the cider and each other..
â?¢ your ability to make the reader able to share the ENTIRE experience.
Wonderful and definitely worth six stars! Rod
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2016
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This rictameter is charming and extremely expressive. One of the best I've ever read on this site.
â?¢ wonderful choice of two-syllable refrain that has a double meaning as we read through the poem.
â?¢ the way your camera glides! We see first the cider being poured, then get a flashback to why it's welcome, and finally the close-up of the couple lying near the fire enjoying the cider and each other..
â?¢ your ability to make the reader able to share the ENTIRE experience.
Wonderful and definitely worth six stars! Rod
Comment Written 22-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2016
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Once again, I appreciate your kind words and am glad you enjoyed the rictamete. I'm not sophisticated - just sincere.
Comment from lindafisher
An excellent rictameter. It is an idyllic scene you have written about here. Open fires are becoming a thing of the past so these scenes are becoming rare. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2016
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An excellent rictameter. It is an idyllic scene you have written about here. Open fires are becoming a thing of the past so these scenes are becoming rare. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2016
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Thanks for the positive feedback. I'm old school all the way...still like open fires.
