Seeing Behind the Eyes
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Steve"A book of poems on people.
46 total reviews
Comment from honeytree
Love the poem and the
words chosen very well
indeed.
loved the words
"At the table of a king,
he could be
but as easily, you could see him
breaking bread
on the street."
Honeytree
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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Love the poem and the
words chosen very well
indeed.
loved the words
"At the table of a king,
he could be
but as easily, you could see him
breaking bread
on the street."
Honeytree
Comment Written 26-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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Ah, thanks Annie. You made my day:)
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that's fine.
annie
Comment from boxergirl
Great job, Teresa, with your Seeing Behind the Eyes poem. I can definitely visualize Steve both in appearance and character!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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Great job, Teresa, with your Seeing Behind the Eyes poem. I can definitely visualize Steve both in appearance and character!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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Thank you Karen:)
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
You have done a wonderful job of describing Steve through your words.
His soul is old
in a youthful way, ~~ brilliant insight into his character
but his heart beats
in tune with God's. ~~ a nice thing to say about a man. How deeper can it get?
In him,
time has no end. ~~ nice!
Great job,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2016
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You have done a wonderful job of describing Steve through your words.
His soul is old
in a youthful way, ~~ brilliant insight into his character
but his heart beats
in tune with God's. ~~ a nice thing to say about a man. How deeper can it get?
In him,
time has no end. ~~ nice!
Great job,
Rhonda
Comment Written 23-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2016
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Thank you so much Rhonda:)
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Steve sounds like the type of person who anyone would like as a friend. Kind, and caring, honest and reliable. Not many around these days. This is a lovely tribute to your friend, will you show him it? Excellent addition to your book of people. :) Sandra x
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2016
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Steve sounds like the type of person who anyone would like as a friend. Kind, and caring, honest and reliable. Not many around these days. This is a lovely tribute to your friend, will you show him it? Excellent addition to your book of people. :) Sandra x
Comment Written 23-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2016
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I don't know if I will show it to Steve or not. Several have said I should. Thanks so much Sandra:)
Comment from nomi338
Steve sounds like one of God's timeless creatures. These ones travel through time teaching valuable lessons. They many times are ignored and are seldom seen in the light they should be viewed in. They never consider themselves to be more important than their fellows. They never put their comfort before the comfort of someone else. The world could learn much from the Steve's of the world, most of us won't as we lack the necessary mindset and heart condition.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2016
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Steve sounds like one of God's timeless creatures. These ones travel through time teaching valuable lessons. They many times are ignored and are seldom seen in the light they should be viewed in. They never consider themselves to be more important than their fellows. They never put their comfort before the comfort of someone else. The world could learn much from the Steve's of the world, most of us won't as we lack the necessary mindset and heart condition.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2016
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You got it exactly and yes we could all learn from the 'Steve's' of the world. Thanks so much.
Comment from Kingsrookviii
This seems to convey good insight into your friend. He sounds like he can get along with anybody. I'm sort of like that, myself. The end is very telling, especially the last line or two. Well done. Bruce.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2016
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This seems to convey good insight into your friend. He sounds like he can get along with anybody. I'm sort of like that, myself. The end is very telling, especially the last line or two. Well done. Bruce.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2016
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Thanks Bruce:)
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The author's words are descriptive, creative and clear. I was
able to visualize Steve with your descriptive words. The poem flows and connects
well.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2016
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Excellent Poem! The author's words are descriptive, creative and clear. I was
able to visualize Steve with your descriptive words. The poem flows and connects
well.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2016
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Thank you:)
Comment from tfawcus
The characterisation here is vivid and you make it easy to imagine the man himself from your writing. I always admire those who can relate easily and naturally with people of all stations.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2016
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The characterisation here is vivid and you make it easy to imagine the man himself from your writing. I always admire those who can relate easily and naturally with people of all stations.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2016
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Thank you Tony:)
Comment from Heather Knight
Your Steve sounds like a delightful guy, someone I would like to meet and talk to. I can indeed 'see' him through your words. Which must mean you've done something right.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2016
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Your Steve sounds like a delightful guy, someone I would like to meet and talk to. I can indeed 'see' him through your words. Which must mean you've done something right.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2016
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Thank you M J:)
Comment from krys123
Hi Teresa;
-what a very enjoyable piece of poetry and I now feel that I know Steve somewhat as I glimpse into your words that exposed the beauty and serenity of his nature and the quantum characteristics that makes him, Steve.
-Areas last three words of your writing, and you know how you read ahead in your mind with some writing in your about to read something that you think you know and then all of a sudden you read the actual writing at something different, well I was thinking your ending would have be written like this: "In him and me being with him time has no end for us!" Oh well that is what I felt in my mind.
-Thank you for checking out my 9 PM Pacific standard Time evening with your admirable and gratifying piece of poetry of a man named Steve.
-Thanks for sharing Teresa and take care and have a good one my friend.
Alex
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2016
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Hi Teresa;
-what a very enjoyable piece of poetry and I now feel that I know Steve somewhat as I glimpse into your words that exposed the beauty and serenity of his nature and the quantum characteristics that makes him, Steve.
-Areas last three words of your writing, and you know how you read ahead in your mind with some writing in your about to read something that you think you know and then all of a sudden you read the actual writing at something different, well I was thinking your ending would have be written like this: "In him and me being with him time has no end for us!" Oh well that is what I felt in my mind.
-Thank you for checking out my 9 PM Pacific standard Time evening with your admirable and gratifying piece of poetry of a man named Steve.
-Thanks for sharing Teresa and take care and have a good one my friend.
Alex
Comment Written 22-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2016
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I'm glad you saw the last line coming and thought it appropriate because I wasn't sure if people would understand that part. Thanks Alex:)
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All I saw that are right Teresa and take care and have a good one.
Alex
