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Gay Marriage

Response to Potlach Prose Challenge

18 total reviews 
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Oh I am so glad you decided to join in because this was SUCH FUN to read.I hope you don't mind I printed a copy to show a friend in my local writing group. This was so cleverly done Tony, great write.
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2016
    Thanks very much, Pearl. I appreciate your review and kind words and, of course, the six stars! Glad you enjoyed this bit of fun enough to share it with others. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from BeasPeas
Excellent
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You are very clever, indeed, Tony. Both letters are amusing and, dare I say, playful? Nevertheless, you did a great job with your letters to
the editor. Marilyn

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2016
    Thanks very much, Marilyn. I appreciate your review and kind words. Glad you enjoyed this bit of fun. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent
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Ha, great job filled with double entrees which would likely whiz past most heads, but not me, nosirree Bob. I also think marriages should be happy.

Great job with the brevity as I know they like em short and sweet, seeing as how they're free space the editor could use to wax on eloquently about their trash.

Excellent offering to the Potlatch, Tony. Good to see you on the dark side.

Gloria

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2016
    Thanks very much, Gloria. I appreciate your review and kind words. Glad you enjoyed this bit of fun. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from LIJ Red
Excellent
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Excellent. Downtrodden may explode when gay is redefined to him, and the other chap may have job burn-out. Witty, smoothly written, and much to prompt.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2016
    Thanks very much, Red. I appreciate your review and kind words. Glad you enjoyed this bit of fun. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from mvbrooks
Excellent
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I enjoyed the tongue-in-cheek humor in both writings. (Wouldn't it be great if gaiety could be provided by law.) Thanks for taking a serious topic and presenting it in this humorous style. Your writing made me smile.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2016
    I don't usually take part in these Prose Potlach challenges, but couldn't resist this one! Glad it amused you! Tony
Comment from Joy Graham
Excellent
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This is too funny :) You capture the poison pen funniness that is so entertaining to read in the papers. I think you played this subject in a safe manner, and would be surprised if anybody found it offensive. Well, maybe the boss lol!

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2016
    I don't usually take part in these Prose Potlach challenges, but couldn't resist this one! Glad it amused you! Tony
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Excellent
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this, kind sir , was absolutely hilarious.
I loved the first and the second both as they both were excellently written.
Nicely done and a laugher too.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2016
    I don't usually take part in these Prose Potlach challenges, but couldn't resist this one! Glad it amused you! Tony
Comment from His Grayness
Excellent
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Aw shuckins' I'm outa sixes while tears of delight are racing down my face which is ok as it was turning red hot with disgrace for not having the stars this delightful and entertaining work well deserves. Being a displaced Aussie here in Nevada, I can certainly relate the kind of reception such a political initiative would receive in AU And especially SA! Lot's of fun and many thanks for a very creative gift of humor! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance

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 Comment Written 18-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2016
    I don't usually take part in these Prose Potlach challenges, but couldn't resist this one! Glad it amused you! Tony