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funny 5-7-5

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Comment from Irish Rain
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I never would have thought of that, but isn't THAT the truth! Clever little 5-7-5 here, good luck in the contest, blessings....

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2016


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Comment from Thomas Bowling
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So then I'm not really lazy. I just write a lot of mysteries. Thanks, I'll tell my wife. Now come up with a reason why I don't take out the garbage.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2016
    LOL Thanks Thomas
Comment from kathleenspalding
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LOL, mysteries indeed! Cute five seven five told the whole story using very few words and gave me a laugh. Excellent choice of artwork. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2016


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    You're welcome
Comment from winnona
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A good 5-7-5 humorous poem entry. I think you completed the challenge of this contest very well. Your words flow together nicely to combine and send the message o the poem to the reader.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2016


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Comment from rydere
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Hi this short poem
Stories can all be

mystery novels if they

are never finished. But I like reading book when I have the time it may take me a long time to finish it, but when I'm done with it I feel good inside so I can't we wait to read again. Something that our kids don't like to do, but I like it they won't stop me from reading books, so please keep up with the great work and I like the picture too.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2016


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reply by rydere on 19-Sep-2016
    You are welcome.
Comment from prettybluebirds
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Exceptional. This is certainly a true poem, Angie. Iove the artwork you found for it. Hope you and John are doing well. How is John's father doing? Keep up the good work. I will probably put a new story on here tomorrow. Love, Auntie

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2016
    Thank you Auntie. John's dad is doing well. He looks ten years younger now that he's got better circulation of. Love you both
Comment from RoostyNester
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I loved your humorous poem. And how right your are. If you don't finish, you will never know the how the story ends, therefore leaving it mystery. Loved it.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2016


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Comment from Judy Couch
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This is a true statement. I'm finding that I often lose interest midway though a book. I either like it so well that I read it through in one sitting or I never finish it.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2016


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Comment from lindafisher
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Ha ha. Very clever. I now realise I am a mystery writer. Well thought out dear author. I wish you well with this contest entry, I love it.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2016


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Comment from Sis Cat
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This 5-7-5 made me smile. It is clever and creative, pointing out a truth that many readers with good intentions know. Thank you for sharing. Congratulations on placing second in the contest with this ingenious entry. It was my favorite.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2016


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    Thank you